Trapped in Paradise

"Thou shalt not kill"

Exodus 20:1–17 (King James Version)

I think the first time I encountered the "person who always tells the truth/person who always lies" riddle was in a Super Mario Choose Your Own Adventure book...

Kyouko, Mizuki and Marii all attend the prestigious St. Arisugawa Girls' Academy, a missionary school run by the Vatican in Japan. Technically, the school isn't even located in Japan, for the three inter-connected artificial islands near Aichi are part of the Vatican grounds and there's even a passport check whenever people enter and leave the grounds. The school of course provides excellent schooling and many prominent families want to send their daughters to the place, but St. Arisugawa Girls' Academy is also a unique schooling situation due to its inclusion of detection in its curriculum. The detective is a protected position in today's society, requiring certain qualifications. St. Arisugawa Girls' Academy is the only place that allows students to study the art of detection at the secondary school level before even entering university. Each spring, the St. Arisugawa Girls' Academy always organizes a special excursion for all students, that mixes up students in all years: two first-years, two second-years and two three-years. Each group of six is then sent to a different location where they have to solve a crime. In reality, the crimes they all encounter are role-played by enormous groups of actors and other people in on the game (the Vatican has money). Each group also won't know what's coming until they are confronted with their specific case, as they only get basic instructions to go to their initial start location. While Kyouko, Mizuki and Marii all participated last year too as first-year students, this year they find all three of them in one group, despite that being very unusual as it's usually two students per year: they are also joined by two first-years and two third-years (as usual). The group are given instructions to board a particular chartered bus and find they're travelling through Aichi Prefecture, where Mizuki also hails from (her knowledge of the local dialect helps them actually communicate with the people in the countryside who speak very thick dialect). As they drive through the mountains however, their driver suddenly dies. They initially think this is part of their excursion, having to "solve the murder of their driver", but it turns he's actually dead, and even their school wouldn't arrange for something like that. The girls however decide to walk the remainder to their destination, as they'll fail their excursion if they don't make it in time. On the way however, they all pass out, and by the time the last one realizes they have been drugged, it's too late.

When the girls wake up, they find themselves in a curious place. They are located in what might be best described as a gigantic donut:there's a huge lake, with a strip of land with house and other buildings surrounding the lake, but beyond the strip of land are just gigantic walls: they're in an open spot that's completely surrounded by unclimbable mountains. The girls are also accosted by men in military uniforms, who accuse them of being spies of the empire. After a while, Mizuki manages to puzzle things together: they are in Utsuhaka Village, a small community that lives deep in this open spot in the mountains, and the people here don't know World War II has ended. The people here had isolated themselves from the outside world during the war, and have been living here since in relative peace, but without any knowledge of the outside world. The only exit out of this place was a tunnel through the mountains, but decades ago the military blew the tunnel up, locking everyone inside. Now there's a small unit of soldiers (some are children of the original soldiers) stationed at the former entrance of the tunnel, but unfortunately for the students, it also happens that some of those soldiers have been murdered. As the only outsiders here, it's perhaps only natural the girls are accused of the murder, but as they try to prove their innocence, the girls also realize the people in this village are... devout Catholic Christians: the people here were originally hidden Christians who lived here precisely out of fear of persecution. The girls manage to prove they're also Christians and are saved by Father Lucas. The girls can't explain how they arrived here, as they just passed out and then woke up here, but Lucas can't help them out of this place: nobody has left this place in decades, so all they can do is live out their lives here in service of the community. The girls learn the village is divided in four sections, corresponding to the cardinal directions, each part housing a different wing of the authorities of the village (church, military, doctor, firefighters etc.). The girls also learn everyone in the village has to be a devout Christian, as nobody can afford to be ostracized by the rest of the village (nobody can leave the village, so ostracization means certain death as you can't get by all on your own). And that makes the murder on the soldiers... impossible, because the ten commandments forbid anyone from commiting a murder. The police officer also asked everyone whether they committed the murder, to which everyone in the village said no: nobody can lie due to the commandments (bear false witness), which means nobody committed the murder. However, during their stay in the village, more people are killed, so it's clear somebody's going against the ten commandments, but who? That is the great mystery in Furuno Mahoro's Gururiyoza Satsujin Jiken ("The Gluriyosa Murder Case" 2013).

Gluriyosa is actually the word "Gloriosa" by the way, but then adapted to the Japanese language and then further transformed across time due to accents.

Gururiyoza Satsujin Jiken is the second novel in The Sailor Uniforms & The Apocalypse series, which focuses on the trio of Kyouko, Mizuki and Marii. In this series, the three girls are all better at a different aspect of crime solving, and they always end up dividing the denouement: Kyouko focuses on the whodunit, Mizuki on the howdunnit and Marii on the whydunnit. The books also form one greater narrative, and one of my criticisms of the first novel were indeed that it felt very much as simply the prologue, with many suggestive scenes and episodes which hinted at a greater thing being set in motion, only you don't get to see any of it. That holds too for this second novel, where we again see scenes that suggest there's something big awaiting the three girls and that their training as a detective will be used for something else, but what that actually is, is not made clear here. So that's certainly a thing to remember if you want to start with this series.

People familiar with Japanese mystery fiction will probably quickly recognize this as a kind of parody on Yokomizo Seishi's Yatsuhaka Mura/The Village of Eight Graves, from the name of the village to the way there are 8 great authorities in the village and there's even a duo of elderly twins and some caverns! The setting of a village that still thinks Japan is in the war is pretty interesting, as this is effectively a time travel story. Technology in the village is also outdated, having not seen the enormous developments even in consumer technology, so life is extremely simple here. Which is also what makes the investigation difficult for the girls, as everyone is also quite simple, being quite sure that the ten commandments are enough to prevent anyone from committing murder or from lying, while we as the reader roll our eyes as we see more and more people getting killed. As more people are killed, the girls also notice the murderer might be doing a mitate murder, i.e. murders that are committed following a certain pattern/made to mirror a certain pattern (like nursery rhyme murders), and we even get a whole mitate lecture in this book, which alone makes this a very interesting work to read.

The way the mitate aspect of the mystery was utilized was extremely original by the way, and one of the more memorable examples of this kind of mystery, as it provides a rather novel motive for the murderer to commit to the mitate pattern. I love how the pattern was hidden so brilliantly in the narrative, as most readers would honestly never think of it, but Furuno actually starts hinting at the pattern fairly early on, and it somehow doesn't feel unfair, even if it does demand of the reader to make certain logical steps that might be a bit too far apart. Still, I absolutely love how Furuno used the mitate trope in this novel and how it is woven into the greater story regarding the village.

In a way, this is a kind of isekai mystery, where the detectives find themselves in a world that is not quite like our own, and in this case, the book feels a bit like the riddle where you have people who can only tell the truth, and where there's one liar. The way Furuno expands that idea to a whole village is pretty cool, especially by basing it on the ten commandments, and while near the end, it does feel a bit like a 'logic puzzle' at times, I have to say I was surprised Furuno managed to come up with a fairly convincing way to pull this off and not just write it off as simply 'yes, the murderer lied.'

The solution part of this novel is also enormous, as Kyouko, Mizuki and Marii all get their own, quite sizeable chapters to explain the crimes in terms of their own specific topics (who/how/whydunnit). It's nearly thirty percent of the book that's devoted to the denouement (and the book's not short in the first place), so that gives you an idea of the scale of the tale. I'm still not quite sure how necessary the split in three parts actually is though. Sure, the three girls speak in very different manners and thus explain their parts very differently, but the girls have been together most of the time, and share their information, so ultimately, it feels like a very arbitrary choice to have the three girls each explain things seperately, especially as each of the girls do seem to understand parts of the mystery beyond the scope of their own "responsibilities": it's not like they only figure out their own specific parts, for their stories make it clear they do understand other parts too at least partially (i.e. to explain the whydunnit, for some part you'd to know whodunnit), but for some reason they do only talk about their designated parts. But it's very satisfying to see the three girls tying the many murders since their arrival in the village together in such an epic manner, and there's a lot to love here, as Furuno really makes great use of the very unique setting of Utsuhaka village to carve out a one-of-a-kind mystery.

That said, I do have to admit I found the novel to be far too long, and with the ongoing narrative without real closure, it's not a very accessible book, or at least, I would only recommend this after reading the first one, but that is a lot to ask of someone for example interested in this book mainly for the mitate murders, or the way it uses the liar/truth teller riddle as the core of its mystery.

So there are parts of Gururiyoza Satsujin Jiken that really make it a very memorable mystery novel, as it makes fantastic use of its very unique, isekai-esque setting to explore themes like the mitate mystery and the notion of telling a lie. On the other hand, it is a very long novel too, and a lot of the underlying story is not really explored in detail as it's presented as part of an ongoing narrative. If you read the first book though, I'd definitely recommend this one too, as this one is genuinely the better one of the two, not just as a sequel in a series, but as a mystery novel an sich.

Original Japanese title(s): 古野まほろ『ぐるりよざ殺人事件』

Revelations of a Lady Detective

"Rationality, that was it. No esoteric mumbo jumbo could fool that fellow. Lord, no! His two feet were planted solidly on God's good earth"

"The Lamp of God"

I'm not writing this review a year after I read it, but by the time this review is posted, it's definitely been more than a year!

The St. Arisugawa Girls' Academy is a mission school run by the Vatican in Japan. No technically, the school isn't even in Japan, for the three inter-connected artificial islands near Aichi are owned by the Vatican and people do have to show their passports when to enter or leave the islands. The academy is a prestigious school not only due to its special background, but also because it is unique as a secondary school focusing on the art of detection. The detective is a protected, and very important job in today's society and requires certain qualifications.  In Japan, you usually start studying to become a detective starting at the college level and can afterwards obtain the necessary qualifications, but the St. Arisugawa Girls' Academy already teaches its girl students to become a detective at the secondary level. 

Kyouko, Mizuki and Marii are all second year students who thus still have a year to go, but Miho and Nobuko, as third year students, have been in a fierce competition for forever to become the highest ranking student upon graduation. Graduating as the top student isn't just to show off, but has practical perks allowing you to become a detective earlier than usual, so both contenders have been aiming for the top, but it is clear Miho will end up highest. However, as the current number 1 and 2 on the rankings, the two of them are allowed to participate in a special test, that will also be reflected in their ranking, so both Miho and Nobuko participate. This winter test involves the twin bell towers of St. Arisugawa Girl's Academy, about seventy metres high. Miho and Nobuko are each brought to one of the towers, to a special room near the top. There they are locked inside, and are told that the one to win this test, is the one who will "approach the Lord the closest." Kyouko is asked to be a witness to the test: from the main building, she's to make sure both Miho and Nobuko will use their flashlight from their respective rooms to signal back to the main building to show they are willing to proceed with the test. The following morning however, a horrible sight is discovered: Miho and Nobuko are both hanging from the crosses on the top of the twin bell towers, and for some reason, Miho is completely naked. But what is equally enigmatic is the fact the two girls have 'switched places': Miho is crucified on the tower where Nobuko was staying, and the reverse holds for Nobuko. Kyouko, Mizuki and Marii are determined to find out what happened to Miho and Nobuko, and while none of them can solve this on their own, they are certainly capable of working together and combine their powers in Furuno Mahoro's Sailor-Fuku to Mokushiroku ("Sailor Uniforms and the Apocolypse", 2012).

First time I ever read anything by Furuno. I think it was the cover, combined with the title that first attracted me, as it suggested kind of Gothic horror novel with some Biblical Apocalypse themes which seemed interesting, but perhaps I should have done a bit more research. For allow me to say this right from the start: this is just part of a larger story, and as a book on its own, Sailor-Fuku to Mokushiroku feels quite uneven and incomplete. The first half of this book is in fact just world-building, explaining about the school, about its ties to the Vatican, about the role of detectives in this world, followed by a slice-of-life-esque section focusing on our protagonists as they experience their daily school life on the island at this unique school. If you're mainly reading this for the mystery, you have to be prepared for a very slow beginning that isn't immediately connected to the main mystery and what is even worse, a lot regarding the mystery isn't even explained in this book. Yes, we identify a murderer and know how they did it and why, or at least, we learn the "direct" reason for the murders, but we don't really understand why, and the book ends with a foreshadowing segment that hints at more adventures for our three heroines and suggesting we'll understand more about these specific murders as we learn more about St. Arisugawa Girls' Academy in subsequent books, but reading this on its own is not very satisfying, as you really feel like you only read the first part of a larger story and are missing things you should know. There are hints about how the Vatican is doing *something* at St. Arisugawa Girls' Academy, but we don't get much beyond the 'hinting' so the book leaves you with a rather unsatisfied feeling.

So the impossible crime of the two students leaving their locked rooms, swapping towers and ending up crucified on the crosses on top of other's tower only makes up for about half of the book and to be more exact, the set-up of this unique and alluring situation is in fact just a very, very small part of the complete book, because soon after we learn about this situation, we're already moving towards the solving of this mystery, though in a way that is quite interesting. For Kyouko, Mizuki and Marii all turn out to specialize in very different aspects of a crime: Kyouko focuses on the whodunit, Mizuki on the howdunnit and Marii on the whydunnit. What is even more unique is that at least in this book, the three aren't really working together to solve the crime, but they decide to look at the impossible murder from their own angles in three seperate groups (each of them finding a different ally to discuss the case with), so we get three seperate "solution" chapters where each of the three girls approaches the problem from a very different angle, but interestingly enough, the three of them do all end up implicating the same person. These three chapters, titled Scuderia Motivo, Scuderia Metodo and Scuderia Criminale make up most of the second half of the book and are surprisingly robust examinations of the impossible crime from their respective angles. Marii's whydunnit for example has a mini-motive-lecture, while Kyouko's whodunnit chapter has her listing all the viable suspects and examining one by one who could be responsible or not. But because the book moves very quickly from the "presentation" of the murders to the three chapters of Whodunnit, Howdunnit and Whydunnit, the reader isn't given much time to think about the case themselves, so the focus seems to lie more on watching the three detectives do their work, rather than really challenging the reader to solve it.

On the whole, I'm a bit torn on the solution to the otherwise awesome-sounding mystery. There are parts of the solution and mystery I find really interesting, and other parts feeling very underwhelming, like for example the victims having to act like complete idiots for this to even remotely work, even though they are the top-ranking students of their year! The howdunnit behind the mystery of the victims swapping towers for example is rather disappointing, with a solution that is so practical it takes away all the allure of the original mystery and the clewing for that part isn't that great. The way the Howdunnit and Whodunnit chapters slowly focus in on the (correct) motive and suspect is good, though it at times relies on a few shortcuts and taking a few things for granted that could've been debated more. I think that ultimately, the idea behind why this crime was committed and regarding some elements, how this was done can be quite interesting, and it certainly piques your interest to how the story will develop in later volumes, but the way it is done in this book, I can't help but feeling compelled to add a "but" after starting with "it has some good ideas, but....". 

So I'm torn on Sailor-Fuku to Mokushiroku. There are elements I like about it, like the Vatican conspiracy-angle which somehow involves the Apocalypse and a girls' academy in Japan that originally made me curious about the series, and the idea of having the three heroines each focusing on different aspects of a crime, that still allows them to arrive at the same answer is pretty awesome. The miraculous murder of the two victims somehow swapping towers and being crucified on top of them also has interesting points, which ties back to the way the mystery is solved in three different ways, but as a whole, there are just too many elements of the mystery I don't think work really well, or feel a bit too forced to be convincing.  I believe this series is now four volumes long, and there's a fifth volume that acts as a crossover with another Furuno series, but I am still not sure whether I'll read more of it. If the following books can skip on setting up the world like this first volume did and go straightforward to the adventures of Kyouko, Mizuki and Marii, then this could become something more interesting.

Original Japanese title(s): 古野まほろ『セーラー服と黙示録』