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Tuesday, July 8, 2025

The King's Club Murder

The king is dead, long live the king! 

Huh, now they went for the color yellow for the book title for the third time in a row.

Disclosure: I am a member of the Honkaku Mystery Writers Club of Japan. I didn't vote for any stories this year as always. But I did manage to go to the Honkaku Mystery Award ceremony for the first time! Finally got to meet some of the authors I have translated and also met some other authors I have been a fan of for a long time!

I have been reviewing the annual summer anthology Honkaku-Ou ("The King of Honkaku") since it started in 2019, so long-time readers of the blog should be familiar with the series now. The pocket-sized anthology collects the best honkaku short stories published the previous year, as selected by the Honkaku Mystery Writers Club of Japan. It practically functions as a companion release to the Honkaku Mystery Award, which is awarded to the best published book (novel or short story collection) each year. Short stories are still often published in magazines and other time-limited (paper) publications in Japan, so sometimes it can be difficult to trace a short story xx months after the magazine it originally appeared in was released. Anthologies like this help in keeping this stories easily available. Honkaku-Ou 2025 ("The King of Honkaku 2025") follows the same format as always, consisting of six stories, as well as a short introduction by the current president of the Honkaku Mystery Writers Club of Japan (Maya Yutaka) and an afterword by Inui Kurumi.

Occasionally I already know some of the stories collected in this book and if I'm lucky, I even have discussed them already on the blog. While I had already read two of the stories in this year's anthology, I haven't actually written the review of that story yet, so I guess I'll do it here... But the story I have already read, and have already discussed is Hayami Shirou wo Oikakete ("Chasing after Hayami Shirou") by Mamon Kouhei, which was included in Bokura wa Kaishuu Shinai ("No Pay-Off for Us", 2024), so I refer to that post for the write-up on that story. The tale was actually not my favorite of Mamon's book, but it has some interesting clues so I can see why it'd get high praise.

Gainen Tantei ("The Concept Detective") by Shiotani Ken starts with the strange tale of Manami, who explains that when she was a child, she saved a spider-like creature at the beach, which turned out to have god-like powers. Grateful for her help, it says it will grant Manami one wish. She wishes for a great detective like from the novels. As it would be a bit weird to just "give" her a living person, the being grants her a special power, that allows her to turn anyone she wants into a great detective, complete with amazing deductive powers and the police willing to listen to the lengthy explanation scenes. Fast-forward to a grown-up Manami, who is now in university. She's still a huge mystery buff and hopes to film a mystery film. She also has her star in mind: Houga Hiromichi, a fellow member in the university's mystery club. She's been trying to get an OK from him, but he's reluctant, saying he's not suited to be a great detective. One day, after a party with most of the members of the club, the members return to the club room, only to find two of the members lying dead at the table: the couple had taken poison together and died. The Romeo and Juliet couple came from fueding families, which is why their fathers were against their dating at first and the two had made up their mind to elope. So why did they commit suicide togehter? But was it really a suicide pact? If only there were a great detective around...

This is an interesting premise for a series, so I'd like to see Shiotani develop this further. It has some parallels with Ooyama Seiichirou's Watson-ryoku, where everyone within the radius of the Watson Force becomes a great detective, but here it's Manami who (unconsciously) can turn a specific person into a great detective, so it'd be cool to see how that'd work out in a series with recurring characters. The story itself is a solid puzzler whodunnit, that follows Queen-esque deductions of determining certain characteristics of the person who could've poisoned the two star-crossed lovers and then determining which of the suspects fits the bill. 

Steam Dragon no Kisou ("The Enigmatic Ride of the Steamdragon") by Kasumi Ryuuichi stars the private detective Kurenaimon who is hired to keep an eye out during the maiden ride of the illustrious steam locomotive C63 0, also known as the Steamdragon. The C63 0 was a  steam locomotive that had been designed, but never built. Decades later used car mogul Aratani Goichi and his two sons (of different monthers) Sentarou and Reiji have used their fortune to build the locomotive and have it run on their own private railway in Hokkaido, a surprisingly large network of rails which was purchased after it became obsolete. Some great train anoraks have been invited to be on the maiden voyage too, but because sometimes such enthusiasts can become a bit too intense, Kurenaimon was hired to keep an eye on things. Reiji has a rather unique train fetish, so he likes to... get naked and meditate to become one with the train, and he has a luxurious carriage all to himself to indulge in his pleasures: it is the very last carriage. Kurenaimon and his friend see Reiji enter his carriage and the two hang around in the carriage before that. When after a while, Sentarou comes looking for his brother, but when they enter, they find only Reiji's head. This is fairly short story, with most of the story dedicated to the set-up rather than the investigation after the discovery of the murder, but it features an interesting train-based locked room mystery with a solution that is just believable enough while also a bit silly when visualizing it. The good kind of crazy!

Aosaki Yuugo's Nawa, Tsuna, Rope ("Cable, Line, Rope") was written especially for an anthology to celebrate Arisugawa Alice's 35th anniversary as a novelist, and is a pastiche of Arisugawa's Writer Alice series. In the foreword featured in this anthology, Aosaki actually says it feels weird to him this story was selected, as he tried to mimick Arisugawa's style the best he could, so did the story win on his merits, or those of Arisugawa? I do really understand why this story would be picked though, as it's a really solid whodunnit. Criminologist Himura Hideo and mystery novelist Arisugawa Alice are assisting the police in the investigation of the murder of a woman, Yasumi Nodoka, who was found washed up on the shore, with clear signs of having been tied. A witness saw a figure carrying something tied up in rope to the waterfront in the night, so it is quickly determined Nodoka had been killed in her apartment and her body dumped in the sea. The motive appears to be a rare trading card Nodoka owned, but is now missing. However, security footage also helps determine the murderer must be someone inside the apartment building, i.e. one of the fellow residents. Because the witness saw Nodoka had been tied up, the police guess the culprit must have thrown the rope that was used away, as it was garbage day for burnables the following day. They examine the security camera footage of the garbage collection site of the building and determine three persons threw away ropes/lines/cables. But which of these three residents killed Nodoka?

This is a very solid story, both as a pastiche and a standalone whodunnit. Aosaki mimicks the style of the Himura stories perfectly with the familiar banter between Himura and Alice and the type of deductions Arisugawa often uses for his stories. As a whodunnit, well, what do you expect of the "Ellery Queen of the Heisei period"? It is a great logical problem, which is solved by logically following all the actions the murderer must have taken based on the evidence and from there, the reader can "easily" determine the identity of the murderer, at least, if they're clever enough. I love the way the story plays with the Japanese language by the way, with nawatsuna and the loanword "rope" all refering to, well, ropes, but all just slightly different enough.

Housoubu ni wa Horobasenai ("I Won't Let The Broadcasting Club Fall") is the first time I read a story by Tsubota Yuuya, and it's actually his debut story. The story revolves around a school's broadcasting club, which is preparing for the upcoming sports festival of the school. They have a suggestion box for playlist requests, but one day, they find an anonymous letter from someone who writes they don't like the sports festival and hopes they can cancel it. The narrator is of course not able to do so, but curious to the reason why, he decides to write a letter back to the writer. What follows is a series of short letters between the two, where the narrator tries to determine why the writer wants the festival cancelled. There are some nice clues hidden within this cute story with a bittersweet conclusion, and I really like it as a school mystery.

Dare mo Yomenai ("Unreadable") by Shirai Tomoyuki was written for a shogi ("Japanese chess) special and therefore revolves around the sport: Chiyokura Hinode is a professional shogi player who has trouble getting into the absolute top, but he's now playing one of his important promotional games. It's becoming late with the game still going on, so the game is paused for a moment, with Chiyokura having to write his next move in advance, which is then sealed so they can continue the game the following day (this to ensure Chiyokura doesn't have a full night to contemplate his next move). When he's alone, he's suddenly abducted by a man and a woman. Chiyokura recognizes neither of them, but it turns out he once played a game with the young man seven years ago, when the latter was still a child. Chiyokura had seen potential in the kid, and had given him his business card. Now the young man has grown up to be... not a shogi player, but a member of the organized crime. And he's in trouble, as last night, two "business contacts" were killed, and he is the main suspect. He, his captain and the big boss were staying in a hotel nearby to meet their business contacts, but early this morning, these two contacts were found dead in their villa. The murderer escaped with the car that belongs to the gang and parked at the hotel, and the three of them all have a key, so any of them could have committed the crime... if not for the fact the captain and the big boss have alibis, having been seen by others in the hotel. Because the 'kid' (and his girlfriend) swear he didn't do it, they decided to abduct Chiyokura (who had been playing his promotion game nearby), because Chiyokura is the cleverest man he knows. Can Chiyokura clear the name of his 'shogi disciple' based only on his testimony?

Okay, I have to admit I was first surprised by how this Shirai tale had nothing really gross, grotesque or off-putting in it. Guess that was because it was written for a shogi special. The problem itself is interesting, as we apparently have two suspects with a perfect alibi, and one without one. The solving of this conundrum is cleverly modelled not after physical evidence, but around reading the actions of each character: not in a psychological manner, but focusing on whether each character is taking the most logical action in their situation as we know it, and if not, can we therefore extrapolate something else might be going on? While the "main" trick used by the culprit might therefore not be incredibly surprising, the way they camouflaged it through their actions, and the way Chiyokura manages to unveil this, does make this a great story to read.

Overall, I'd say Honkaku-Ou 2025 may even been the best iteration of the anthology until now, providing variety, but also a very high level of quality. I basically like all the stories included this year, and they all have some clever original set-ups or techniques to use to show off how even within the confinements of the short story, you can do very clever mystery plots. If you have never read these anthologies, I would really recommend this one, not only because it's the most recent, but because it's honestly the one with the most bang for your buck.

Original Japanese title(s): 真門浩平「速水士郎を追いかけて」/ 潮谷験「概念探偵」/ 霞流一「スティームドラゴンの奇走」/ 青崎有吾「縄、綱、ロープ」 / 坪田侑也「放送部には滅ぼせない」 / 白井智之「誰も読めない」

Wednesday, November 13, 2024

The Poet and the Lunatics

"One must never place a loaded rifle on the stage if it isn't going to go off."
"Letter from Chekhov to Aleksandr Semenovich Lazarev"

I like this cute cover!

Publisher Tokyo Sogensha has been offering a fantastic platform for mystery writers who haven't been published yet for decades now with the prestigious Ayukawa Tetsuya Award: the award includes a publishing contract for the winning manuscript, and writers like Ashibe Taku, Asukabe Katsunori, Aizawa Sako, Aosaki Yuugo, Amon Junichi, Ichikawa Tetsuya, Ichikawa Yuuto, Imamura Masahiro, Houjou Kie and many more have all made their professional debuts by winning this award aimed at novel-length works. In the meantime, Tokyo Sogensha has also provided a platform for short stories, which would also be rewarded with publication in their literary magazine. 2022 was the last time this award was called the Mysteries! Newcomer Award, as it is now called the Sogen Mystery Short Story Award. The last winner of the Mysteries! Newcomer Award was Mamon Kouhei, with the short story Lunatic Retriever. This short story is included in Mamon's 2024 short story collection Bokura wa Kaishuu Shinai ("No Pay-Off for Us", 2024), which provides a nice showcase of his mystery plotting skills, as well as his talent for writing characters.

The book opens with Gaitou Interview ("Street Interview"), which offers a seemingly harmless mystery: Kirito is approached by classmate Fujiwara, who needs some help, and Kirito is known for having a very keen eye for details. Fujiwara's sister was recently interviewed on the street about a few topics, like the trend of younger people not reading newspapers anymore. Her sister thought the interview went well, but after it was broadcast, people on the internet started bashing her sister for giving stupid answers, and some even just bad-mouthed her appearance. Fujiwara doesn't know what Kirito can do, but hopes he can somehow make it stop. After a careful examination of the street interview video, Kirito is however indeed able to miraculously stop the bashing. This is a unique kind of mystery, as it doesn't involve any real crime, but it is set-up in a convincing manner, even if some of the clues are introduced too close to Kirito's proposed solution to resolving this matter. It's a mystery you could imagine happen in real-life, and I really like how the story eventually wraps back to Kirito's own backstory of how he became known at school as a kind of detective.

Kaeru-Goroshi ("The Murder of a Frog") is about the comedy duo Frogs in the Well, consisting of Shougo and Mitsunori.  Shougo is introduced to Miki, a great fan of the duo, via a mutual friend, and the two start seeing each other more often, eventually leading to them dating officially. While the two comedians have been working hard on their act, they never had their big break, until they finally manage to win first place in a prestigious comedy contest, which results in them getting more offers for appearances on television. The two are not used to their new succes, getting drained by the constant stream of gigs and to make things worse, Shougo is suddenly rejected by Miki, who, despite still being fond of him, somehow can't stand being with him anymore. It's during this period a comedian from the same agency, who has been in the trade for a very long time without any succes, finally wins his first contest. Masuoka Hideki never had much success, but he was always super nice to his juniors at the agency, so everyone is beyond happy for him, and they all gather at the offices of the agency to celebrate his long-awaited award. They all have something to drink and after a while, people walk in and out the room to make phone calls and smoke, but when Mitsunori goes out on the balcony on the third floor, he spots a dead Masuoka on the street below, and lying next to him, is a squished frog. Considering Masuoka just won an award and had his big break that very night, it doesn't seem likely this is a suicide, and suspicion falls on all who were in the building at the moment, but because it is not clear at first when Masuoka left the room and died, it is difficult to establish who was where when, and therefore who has an alibi or not. After reading the first story, I had mistakenly assumed this book would not feature murders at all, so this was a pleasant (?) surprise. Mamon spins a very Queen-esque whodunnit tale, where you use the various physical clues sprinkled across the tale to cross out suspects off the list, and there are some clever twists hidden in this process too, but what is the most memorable about this story, is definitely the motive for the murder. While a motive is a very subjective thing (one can find a motive satisfying, while someone else not at all), I find Mamon's efforts in presenting this aspect too as a fair-play mystery, and the way he set-up the motive with foreshadowing quite memorable. Considering how the whodunnit-part clewing went and the way the motive was so thoroughly foreshadowed, I can easily imagine this same short (very short!) story be fleshed out into a full novel, and it would've worked as well.

Tsuisou no Ie ("The House of Memories") is a very short story, where a father and his two adult children visit the home of the grandfather, who recently passed away. While going through his stuff, the narrator realizes something odd's going on: he has vivid memories of visiting his grandpa's study, which had bookcases filled completely with books. He hadn't visited his grandfather at home for many years, especially not because they had a fight a few years ago, but he knows his grandfather kept on buying books and that he never ever sold his books... But where have all the books his grandfather had bought after he last visited him, have gone to, as the bookcases in the study were already completely full back then? Cute little mystery that may have a very simple solution, but it just works very well with the theme of childhood memories.

Hayami Shirou wo Oikakete ("Chasing after Hayami Shirou") is a two-party mystery, where the narrator first tells how his classmate Hayami Shirou once saved him from a false accussation at school: trash had been thrown around the pool, and because the narrator had a fight with the teacher of the swimming club at the time, he was accused of the vandal act. Hayami however very ingeniously, and swiftly proves who the real culprit was. The narrator and Hayami now go to the same high school, and Hayami's talents are once again needed, when the football (soccer) club find their storeroom ransacked, with balls and other equipment stolen. The stolen items however are found the following day, having been left somewhere on the school grounds. The way Hayami deduces who the culprit is, and why, is clever and I do like the clues are based on physical senses that usually aren't featured as strongly in written fiction, though at the same time, that is also why the story kinda falls flat for me, as we read a lot about these senses, but while your mileage may vary, I did find it hard to believe how "exactly" for example a character could recognize a lingering smell. I do like the little twist at the end of the deduction process that allowed Hayami to point at the one and only culprit, and the motive works well in this school setting too.

Lunatic Retriever is set at a college mixed dormitory, which has one 'famous' inhabitant: Yoshida Haruka won a literary award at age 20 and has been publishing books these last two years. She's also quite arrogant and doesn't mingle much with the other students living in the dorm. However, that doesn't mean her death isn't a shock. On the day a solar eclipse happens, she is found dead in a storeroom inside the dorm. The storeroom was originally a smoking area inside the common room, with two doors (one opening in, the other door opening out). Before the eclipse, people tried going to the storeroom to get something, but found both doors locked for some reason. After the eclipse, the students find it odd the doors are still closed, so they force the doors open. They not only learn the doors were "locked" because they had been taped tight with duct tape, they also find a dead Haruka lying on the floor, as well as a burning stove. The room being taped shut and the burning stove suggests Haruka committed suicide by carbon monoxide poisoning, but on the other hand, they also are of the opinion Haruka would be the last person to commit suicide. But if it was murder, how did the murderer escape the taped storeroom? This is a very dense story, with a lot to offer: a taped locked room, Ellery Queen style deductions to determine who the murderer is, and we even have a solar eclipse... Because of the clue density, we even have room for multiple people presenting their theories, and interestingly, I think that in terms of the locked room mystery, the final solution isn't even as impressive as the earlier ones. What is really memorable about this story however, is the ending, when we are confronted with what is thematically an absurdly shocking revelation. It is a funny, meta-level observation that in a different work could have catastrophic implications, but it works in this short story setting and gives you some food for thought regarding the mystery genre, while also still functioning as a mystery story itself. The theme, in hindsight, can be found in other stories in the volume too, which wraps things up nicely.

This is the first time I read anything by Mamon Kouhei, and while I am generally more a fan of short stories, and I did enjoy the short stories found here, I have to admit they left me wanting for more, for stories that show the same type of plotting, clewing and ways in identifying whodunnit, but with more room for depth and that is also the case for the motives, there are some really originaly character motivations at display here that result in interesting mystery settings, and I'd love to see Mamon for example trying to do a longer detective novel with such themes. So I'll keep an eye out for Mamon's future output!

Original Japanese title(s): 真門浩平『ぼくらは回収しない』 「街頭インタビュー」/「カエル殺し」/「追想の家」/「速水士郎を追いかけて」/「ルナティック・レトリーバー」