Das Fräulein von Scuderi

ほら ti ta ta ta ガラスの針

十二回の刻を打てば

 聖なる夜の七頭の影が 

無力な人形に手を伸ばす 

「Marionette Fantasia」（Garnet Crow) 

Look ti ta ta ta

When the glass hands strike twelve 

On the holy night, the seven-headed shadow

reaches out for the powerless figure

"Marionette Fantasia" (Garnet Crow)

One of the best novels I read last year was Kobayashi Yasumi's Alice Goroshi (2013), also known as The Murder of Alice. This brilliant fantasy mystery novel introduced us to Ari and Imori, two college students who discovered they shared a common dream, linking them to another world. Each night, both of them would dream very lively dreams about being characters in a mysterious Wonderland with fantastical creatures and having adventures or simply nonsensical conversations with characters like the Mad Hatter, the Cheshire Cat, Boojums and the Queen of Hearts. The characters from Wonderland in turn always dreamed about living on some boring Earth, doing mundane stuff there, completing this two-way link. The slow-witted Bill the Lizard for example was the sharp-witted Imori on Earth and while both characters had their own distinct personalities, they shared their memories. In Alice Goroshi, Ari and Imori learn that if a person dies in Wonderland, even if it's 'just a dream', the Earth counterpart dies too and they realize someone is murdering people in Wonderland to kill their Earth counterparts. With Alice in Wonderland being framed for these Wonderland murders, Ari and Imori, and Alice and Bill the Lizard work together to uncover the true culprit.

A second volume followed with Kobayashi's Clara Goroshi (The Murder of Clara, 2016), though this is technically a prequel, set shortly before the events in Alice Goroshi. The mentally-challenged Bill the Lizard one day takes a wrong turn in Wonderland and eventually finds himself in a world he has never seen before, inhabitated by humans, but also automata (robots), magical snake-women, seven-headed mice and talking nutcrackers. Bill meets with Clara, a girl in a wheelchair, and Drosselmeyer, a judge and inventor, who quickly realizes that Bill is from a different world. He explains to Bill that this is a different world from Wonderland, but that the people in this world, which he dubs the Hoffman Universe, also have avatars in the world they call "Earth" and that they'll meet there because they have something to discuss with him. Back on Earth, Bill's counterpart Imori is approached by... Kurara, a Japanese girl in a wheelchair and Drosselmeyer, her German uncle who teaches at Imori's college. Clara has received a threatening letter, but attempts have been made on both Clara in the Hoffman Universe, as well as on Kurara here on Earth (which is why she's in a wheelchair). They hope that Imori and Bill, as an outside party present on both Earth and the Hoffman Universe, can help figure out who is trying to kill Clara in both worlds. Imori reluctantly agrees to the job (though he has Professor Drosselmeyer promise that Judge Drosselmeyer will find a suitable partner for Bill the Lizard while in the Hoffman Universe, as Bill is rather dense). However, Imori is unable to prevent Kurara from falling into a deathly trap, while Clara too disappears from the Hoffman Universe. Bill the Lizard (and Imori) is at the risk of becoming the scapegoat for these murders, until Mademoiselle de Scudéri in the Hoffman Universe decides to get involved.

Okay, so before I started reading this novel, I genuinely thought, nay, I never even doubted that this novel would be about Klara from Heidi. I mean, I knew this book started with a meeting with a girl in a wheelchair, and how many girls named Klara in a wheelchair could there be in children's literature? Turns out that was a fake-out, for it's revealed very early on that Clara Goroshi is not set in the universe of Heidi, but in a literary universe featuring the creations of German author E. T. A. Hoffman, known for works like Nussknacker und Mausekönig (The Nutcracker and the Mouse King) (on which the ballet is based). Unlike the Wonderland in Alice Goroshi however, Clara Goroshi is not set in the universe of one specific Hoffman work, but in a universe where characters from various stories all live side-by-side: from characters like Drosselmeyer and Marie from Nussknacker und Mausekönig to Clara, Nathanael and Coppola from Der Sandmann and Mademoiselle de Scudéri from Das Fräulein von Scuderi. The characters don't follow the settings from the original stories exactly either (as they all live together now), so it's a bit of a mish-mash in a Marvel Cinematic Universe-esque approach. I myself am not really familiar with Hoffman's work, but fans may find it interesting to see how these characters are portrayed in their new roles in this novel.

While Clara Goroshi is technically a prequel set immediately before Alice Goroshi, it's most definitely best read after reading the first novel, as it builds on the great premise of the first novel. In Alice Goroshi, Kobayashi explored the relation between Wonderland and Earth to bring a wonderful fantastical mystery, by having the reader, Ari and Imori slowly learn how actions in one world were reflected in the other world, and the avatars in both worlds had to work together, sharing knowledge and information in order to catch the brilliant murderer who made use of these connections. Clara Goroshi is built upon these foundations, so some elements that are only revealed later in Alice Goroshi are actually mentioned early on in Clara Goroshi, so that might spoil the former if you don't read them in order. That said, knowing Alice Goroshi certainly doesn't make the job easier for the home detective, because Kobayashi once again makes fantastic use of the premise of avatars in two connected worlds, while also portraying an enchanting fantasy world with larger-than-life characters with incredibly funny and whimsical dialogue that fits so well with the atmosphere of these novels, that embrace the dark side of children's literature.

While Clara Goroshi is definitely a fantasy novel, with characters like automata and talking nutcrackers, the core mystery plot is of course pure deductive bliss, one that works exactly because it is set in a world that is not real. Kobayashi does a good job at going beyond the framework he laid out in Alice Goroshi, taking a step back and saying "Okay, I did this and established that in the first novel, so now I can go this way with this second novel." Having Alice Goroshi as his base allows him to pull of some nice ideas, and especially the misdirection is once again great. In Alice Goroshi, the misdirection was mainly focused within the whimsical, nonsensical dialogue between the utterly nuts characters from Wonderland: in Clara Goroshi, we have a murderer who does a far more impressive job at using misdirection to confuse the detectives, and the great thing is of course that these ideas only work because of the supernatural setting of these novels: these tricks and ideas can simply not be used in "normal" settings. While technically, the underlying idea is something you'll often see in mystery fiction, the variation shown here makes such clever use of the rules and ideas established in both this and the first novel, that it's absolutely original, and due to the careful way in which Kobayashi plotted the novels, it also feels completely fair, despite the 'magic'. It's therefore such a shame Kobayashi used such a lame clue to out the identity of the murderer (the accidental slip of the tongue), as the core idea is far better than that.

What I think is especially great about this novel is that the underlying premise is very likely to fool readers who have read Alice Goroshi already, the readers who are familiar with how Earth and the other worlds are linked. The rules for both the Earth-Wonderland and Earth-Hoffman-Universe connections are exactly the same, and given their experience with Alice Goroshi, you'd think experienced readers will have an edge and have some idea of what to expect, Kobayashi does a commendable job by not subverting the established rules or even adding new rules on top of what we already know, but very simply, yet effectively using those same rules to create a plot which experienced readers are more likely to fall for than new-time readers. Some elements of the plot may raise questions with experienced readers, but it's unlikely they'll see through the whole thing, while I have a feeling first time readers will have less trouble asking the right questions.

Some parts of the story are less cohesive than the first novel though. The underlying reason for the motive for example is incredibly convoluted, involving several characters to simply act as horrible as possible for... no absolutely reason at all than to be cruel to everyone around them and to serve as the background setting for the titular murder. You don't need to figure this part out to directy identify the murderer/murder method, but it is quite difficult to truly accept the circumstances which led to Kurara's murder, whereas Alice Goroshi ultimately had a very human motive. Kurara Goroshi also seems to be a sort of ultimate crossover novel for Kobayashi: a few detective characters from his other stories also make guest appearances, and there's even a part that's confusing until you look it up: one secondary character will experience something that seems to go utterly against the rules that have been established so far about the link between Earth and the other worlds and Kobayashi uses his characters to explicitly tell the reader that his experience is singularly unique and not of consequence in solving the mystery of Kurara Goroshi. Turns out that the experiences that character had are described in an unrelated horror story by Kobayashi. Feels a bit cheap and distracting to have such a scene solely to link to another story, even if Kobayashi makes it clear that that one scene should not be considered when trying to solve the mystery.

While I had of course expected this already considering the first novel, I can safely say I really liked Clara Goroshi too: it's a great example of the fantasy mystery novel, using its unique, but clearly established supernatural rules to present highly original mystery plots. The way in which Kobayashi utilizes famous existing literature as its backdrop also gives this series a unique feeling, and while I myself was not familiar with Hoffman's work before, I loved seeing all these fantastical creatures interacting with each other, and with Bill the Lizard. I read the pocket version, which was released early 2020, and I hope the pocket version for the third novel (Dorothy Goroshi, which I think is about Dorothy from The Wizard of Oz) will follow soon too.

Original Japanese title(s):  小林泰三『クララ殺し』