Wednesday, July 19, 2023

The Case of the Creative Crime

「月に代わっておしおきよ」
『美少女戦士セーラームーン」
 "In the name of the moon, I'll punish you!"
"Pretty Guardian Sailor Moon"

I have only been to an anime/manga fan convention once in my life actually, and that was mostly as a panelist/sitting at a booth. Though I guess sitting at the booth at the November Festival of Kyoto University selling the Kyoto University Mystery Club annual magazine was a similar experience, even if that wasn't an anime convention...

Just before Professor Tsukihime passed away after a suspicious accident, he confided to his daughter Rin that he and his people at the Tsukihime Science Laboratory had been working on a suit called the Amplifier, which powers up the wearer. Professor Tsukihime had been working on four sets of suits in order to battle the evil Shadow Empire and their leader Schatten, but he has one final hope: Rin was actually one of the four girls who were selected to wear the suit, being completely compatible with its specifications. Vowing to avenge her father's death and to carry on his mission, Rin manages to find the three other girls who were selected to don Amplifiers, and helped by their allies at the Tsukihime Science Laboratory and Colonel Fester, an American army man and friend of Professor Tsukihime, the Powered Quartet has been succesful in fighting off attacks by the mysterious Shadow Empire. But one evening, while everyone is relaxing, the alarms go off at the Tsukihime Science Laboratory. Rin immediately transforms in her powered form, but learns that the "intruder" was only a dummy. She quickly goes Saki's room, which is right next to her's, to check up on Saki, but is shocked to find Saki, in powered form, lying on the floor with a dagger in her back. But the intruder was a fake, so who could've killed Saki? Rin is even convinced she never heard anyone come up the stairs until she found Saki, and the only people on this floor were Saki, their friend Colonel Fester and Rin herself. Is there a traitor within the Tsukihime Science Laboratory....?

That is the big cliffhanger of volume 6 of Lunatic Dream, a succesful sci-fi bishojo sentai mystery novel series by Takasawa Noriko, of which an anime adaptation has recently started airing. Takasawa was originally a mystery novelist, and Lunatic Dream certainly has mystery-elements too, as shown by the shocking cliffhanger, and that's also the reason why the members of the dojin circle A Large Teashop have been a fan of the series too. In an earlier dojinshi (fanzine/self-published book) published by the group, they challenged each other to predict what would happen in the coming volumes of Lunatic Dream, and some of them got really close, so it is decided that for the upcoming summer Comiket, the world's greatest anime/manga/game convention, they'll do a similar book. The upcoming volume 7 will be the final volume of Lunatic Dream, so their new book Wish Upon The Moon will feature stories by each of the members of A Large Teashop where they'll try to predict how Saki's murder in the Tsukihime Science Laboratory will be solved and also how Lunatic Dream will end. On the hot summer day that is August 17, the members of A Large Teashop make their way to Harumi, where Comiket is held. As sellers, the members all arrive early at the convention site, preparing their booth, but also to swing by the special booth of the printer, as they had Wish Upon The Moon delivered straight to Comiket. But when they unpack the box and check the books, they find the final few pages of the book have been swapped with one new page, which says "Everyone who worked on this book shall be killed.", signed by "The Shadow". Every printed copy of their book has this page, but they have no idea how this page got there, as they checked each and every page to see if there were no swapped or missing pages, before handing it in at the printer's weeks ago. They obviouly can't sell Wish Upon The Moon as it is now, so they are forced to rely on stock of older books. Because some of the members also have their own personal booths, the group scatters once the regular visitors are admitted inside, with enormous crowds (often in cosplay!) flowing inside the various convention buildings. But after a few hours, a dead body is found inside one of the bathroom stalls, and the victim turns out to be one of the members of A Large Teashop. News of this hasn't really spread yet, when another member at her own personal booth is poisoned and drops dead and this isn't the end of it... Who is killing the members of A Large Teashop during Comiket, and how are their deaths related to their predictions about Saki's murder in Wish Upon The Moon? The answer lies in Komori Kentarou's Comiket Satsujin Jiken, or as the cover also says: The Comicket Murder Case (1994). And yes, the cover says Comicket, probably because an official English spelling hadn't been decided yet at the time.

Comiket Satsujin Jiken is the debut work of Komori Kentarou, though it might not have been in a different imeline. Over ten years ago, I read Komori's Lowell-jou no Misshitsu ("The Locked Room in the Castle Lowell"), also a book with a comic book background, and in the afterword of Comiket Satsujin Jiken, it is mentioned that Lowell-jou no Misshitsu actually made it to the final selection round of the Edogawa Rampo Prize (which is a prize which involves the publication of an unpublished book). So Lowell-jou no Misshitsu had almost been Komori's debut work and was in fact published after Comiket Satsujin Jiken as his second book. Anyway, in our timeline, his debut work is Comiket Satsujin Jiken, and in a way, it does feel like one. For this book is absolutely packed with ideas, and you can tell Komori just wanted to do everyhing he wanted to do in this book, and as a complete package, the book has a lot of interesting elements to it.

I have to say that I didn't know much about the book before I got started on it: it was just the idea of a murder mystery occuring at Comiket that really atttracted me. I have never been to Comiket, but anyone who has been interested in anime/manga/games for some time will at some time have heard about the world's largest fan convention. In particular, Comiket is a fan-driven convention with a focus on fan-created content, mostly dojinshi, or self-published fanzines and comics (usually based on existing IPs) or for example self-published video games. It's of course also well known for all the cosplay going on. I haven't much experience with anime conventions myself, having only done a panel once and hanging around while waiting for my panel, so never really been there as a "regular visitor", but still, the idea of a murder mystery at a fan convention just sounded a lot of fun, as booths, cosplay, the crowd and all of that provided a lot of potential.

So imagine my surprise when Komori didn't only use that, but added a whole story-within-a-story. Two of them, actually. First Komori come up with the fictional novel and anime series Lunatic Dream, a bishojo sentai series in the vein of Sailor Moon, which of course provides us with the in-universe murder of Saki in the Tsukihime Science Laboratory, which seems impossible at first sight, or at least inexplicable (only Rin, Saki and Colonel Fester were upstairs, but suppose Fester was the murderer... why would he do that under those circumstances?). In Wish Upon The Moon, the seven members of A Large Tea Shop all wrote something short where they try to explain the murder of Saki. The result is a kind of The Poisoned Chocolates Case-type of fanzine. We get to read all of the contributions of the seven members, and they all tackle the problem differently. Some really see it as a mystery story to be solved and try to build a very tight theory based on the clues in a formal essay, others are less interested in the mystery and more in the characters, leading to "normal" fan fiction that serve as character studies that focus on motive. The highlight is perhaps the solution that is completely written as a parody of Kokushikan Satsujin Jiken, complete with all the pedantic talk! Because the initial situation of Saki's death is only explained very briefly and you as the reader don't know much about Lunatic Dream, it's not really the intention of the author for the reader to guess all these possible solutions to Saki's murder (a lot of information about the series you'll only first hear mentioned when applied to a theory), but it's fun to see how these different members all try to come up with something different to the problem, and also utilize completely different writing styles and angles. None of the solutions to Saki's semi-locked room murder are really impressive or memorable on their own, but it's fun seeing the members of A Large Teashop having fun with the idea, and it's really catchy. What is also fun is that Wish Upon The Moon is really ncluded within Comiket Satsujin Jiken. The main narrative of Comiket Satsujin Jiken is actually printed on the pages in double columns, while the chapters of Wish Upon The Moon are printed like normal, clearly seperating the Wish Upon The Moon part from the rest of the book, and Wish Upon the Moon also includes fan art of Lunatic Dream and other typical fanzine parts. The book of Comiket Satsujin Jiken also has a different Lunatic Dream cover beneath the slipcover, and it's things like this that make Comiket Satsujin Jiken fun to read as a physical book, playing with the covers and the typesetting and all of that!

And then there's the main story of Comiket Satsujin Jiken too! Komori makes great use of the unique setting that is Comiket that arrive at an interesting problem: several members are killed in the span of a few hours and as all the victims are members of A Large Teashop, it is of course suspected the murderer is one of the remaining members, but there is one problem: how could the murderer have commited these murders during Comiket? While basically none of the remaining members have full alibis for every single second, as they'd sometimes wander away from their booth, go buy some dojinshi themselves at other stands or of course just go out to buy something to drink or eat or to use the toilet, none of them were gone for very long, and fact is: you need a loooooooot of time to move around at the convention site once it's open for visitors. In particular, one victim had her own stand on the floor above, but due to the gigantic crowd on the spiral staircase going up, and with rows of customers circling around the stand floor, it would have taken almost 50 minutes for anyone to make their way from the A Large Teashop stand up and back down, and of course, somebody would've noticed if someone had been gone for nearly an hour. This idea of an alibi due to the crowd of Comiket is nicely found, as are other ideas as some members proving their alibi by showing they had been making an illustration in a sketchbook for a customer, again a very typical con thing. Komori wrote this book after his own visits to Comiket (nowadays of course held at Tokyo Big Sight, but this was back when it was held at Harumi a few times), and the place really becomes alive as Komori describes everything at Comiket, from the people manning the booths and preparing for opening, to the visitors doing cosplay and taking pictures to Comiket staff members trying to keep things safe for everyone. A lot of the mystery-related ideas like the alibis and all depend on the unique convention setting, so that's a lot of fun. Not all of the ideas are particularly remarkable (some parts could've been clewed a little bit more I think, like how the trick surrounding the first murder), but Komori manages to tie these ideas to specifically the Comiket setting really well and it's by doing this several times in a row, you do feel that as a whole, the book works as a mystery novel. Other ideas behind how the murderer managed to swap the final pages of Wish Upon the Moon with the threat page or things like the motive work in the context of the book I think, and while not particularly memorable, all of these ideas do really tie in well with the setting. The fact the book actually features photographs of Comiket (from back then) also helps set the mood.

There's also a lot of "general" Comiket talk, as the members of A Large Teashop explain what Comiket is to the police inspector, so you could read this without any prior knowledge of Comiket, though I suspect most people reading this book, or even this review, will at least have heard of Comiket. Funny is the talk about the presence of mystery fiction at Comiket by the way. The book is written early 90s, but there are mentions of things like being able to find dojinshi of Shimada Souji's work, which I think isn't an invention by Komori for this book, but really what was found at Comiket back then, and he very probably means Mitarai X Ishioka smut. Oh, and one final interesting to note: when Comiket Satsujin Jiken was reprinted as a paperback pocket, it was accompanied by a seperate new release: Lunatic Dream was a manga, drawn by the artist who did the cover art of the paperback pocket and written by Komori Kentarou and it was basically the in-universe series Lunatic Dream, now told as a seperate, full story. I haven't read it, but it's supposed to be reasonably fun. There are stories that some book shops back then didn't place this book near the mystery novels though, even though only mystery fans would've known what Lunatic Dream is.

Anyway, Comiket Satsujin Jiken is a book that's absolutely stuffed: a story-within-a-story, multiple solutions to a locked room murder, a full Kokushikan Satsujin Jiken parody, essays, fan art, a series of semi-impossible murders happening at the biggest fan convention in the world, observations on fan culture in the late eighties/early nineties. You can tell Komori absolutely loved working on the book, and that's not just the story of the book, but all the way down to physical traits of the book like double covers and making use of the lay-out to highlight the fanzine within this book. Taking the tricks on their own, a lot of them are quite simple, and some characters do have very little screentime (though you do get to learn them via their contributions to Wish Upon the Moon), but it's Komori's sheer enthusisasm for everything that goes in in this book and the unique setting that really won me over. Definitely worth a read if the idea of a murder case happening at a fan convention appeals to you.

Original Japanese title(s): 小森健太郎『コミケ殺人事件』

Wednesday, July 12, 2023

The Secret of the Tibetan Treasure

Would you tell me, please, which way I ought to go from here?”
“That depends a good deal on where you want to get to,” said the Cat. 
"Alice's Adventures in Wonderland"

Is this... the first non-Japanese mystery novel review of this year? I suppose it is...

Adam Merriweather, wealthy, well-known collector of Tibetan art and artifacts and brother of the equally well-known Tibetan academic Dr. Jed Merriweather, receives a visit by Jack Reffner, who offers him a religious manuscript and an adventurous tale of how he snuck into Tibet, a country normally closed to visitors, how he met a monk on the way back but accidentally swapped bags before being found out and deported out of Tibet. With no way to return the manuscript and out of money, Reffner hopes to sell off this manuscript to Merriweather. While the seller doesn't get nearly as much as he hoped from Merriweather, he still walks away with a cheque, but that's not of much help when he's later found murdered in his hotel room, strangled. A piece of what appears to be a Tibetan scarf puts Lieutenant Mack of the Chicago Police and his friend Theocritus Lucius Westborough, historian and amateur sleuth, points them in the direction of Merriweather. Merriweather admits Reffner visited him, offering the manuscript and we also learn that the lama Tsongpun Bonbo is in Chicago, as some years ago, his path crossed that of Reffner in Tibet: Reffner stole the centuries-old manuscript by Padma Sambhava, and Tsongpun Bonbo wants the manuscript returned to him. Merriweather seems to have some understanding for Tsongpun Bonbo's plight, but he still seems reluctant to immediately return the manuscript, having his assistant Chang, a Tibetan man, work on a quick translation in secret. Lieutenant Mack and Westborough figure Reffner's death has to do with this business as he was killed with a Tibetan scarf, so they concoct a plot to install Westborough in the Merriweather house for the time being, by faking an injury. The Merriweather house has its own museum wing named the Tibetan Room, which is filled with statues and other Tibetan art on the ground floor, and can be looked down upon from the gallery one floor above. It is here when later Adam Merriweather is found dead, but as the doors to the Tibetan Room were locked from the inside and the dust on the gallery balustrade above is not disturbed, nobody could've left the Tibetan Room until Merriweather was discovered, meaning he must have died from a natural death, right? Or was it Tibetan black magic that did him in? The answer is to be found in Clyde B. Clason's 1938 novel The Man from Tibet

I read the Dutch translation titled De man uit Tibet by the way, translated by H. Terwynne and featuring rather cool original artwork by C. Boost, both as cover and inside.

I had been wanting to read this book for some while, as it is one of the books featured in Arisugawa's gorgeous book An Illustrated Guide to the Locked Room 1891-1998. I never really read the text accompanying the entry about The Man from Tibet though, as I didn't want to have much fore-knowledge before reading the book, so I only had a small glance at the illustrations of the locked room situation and that was over 10 years ago, so I have to admit I had completely different expectations of this locked room mystery. In hindsight, I guess the title The Man from Tibet should have informed me this wasn't set in Tibet, but because the exterior design of the Merriweather house shown in An Illustrated Guide to the Locked Room somewhat resembled a monastery, and I remembered a floorplan which seemed like a temple art gallery (in fact, it was the Tibetan Room), I always imagined the story was about a locked room murder inside a Tibetan monastery. And the cover art of the Dutch version didn't help much to correct my misunderstanding! With the book starting with an account of a visit to Tibet, even a few pages in, I was still fully expecting someone to talk about an impossible murder happening in Tibet long ago and how it would be solved many years later through discussions.

And speaking of the book starting with a travel account: those are probably the most engaging parts of this book! There are two different accounts of two people getting into Tibet, at the time a closed country, and both stories-within-the-story read as adventurous tales. Of course, this is a book from the thirties, so also cue somewhat dated views on "the Chinese/Tibetans/Japanese/Asians" in general found within these accounts, and even in the real-time parts, though on the other hand, there's also interesting parts on Tibetan religions, both on Buddhist and pre-Buddhist variants, and while a quick look on Wikipedia seems to tell me that historical academic understanding of pre-Buddhist Tibetan religions have changed now, the things said in this book seem to be commonly acccepted when this book was written, so that's nice. So while you have quite a few characters who basically confirm what you might expect an average person may think about Asians back then, there's also captivating (if somewhat dated by academic progress) parts on Tibetan religions in between, and they really set the stage for the murder on Adam Merriweather, set inside the Tibetan room full of statues and other religious artifacts collected by the victim. 

The book is surprisingly "spread-out" in terms of "active" mystery: the murder on Reffner happens rather early in the book, and then you have a very long investigative section where Mack and Westborough try to figure out who would have a motive to kill Reffner, but the Adam Merriweather/quasi-impossible murder doesn't happen until around the 3/4 mark, and obviously, by that time there's little time left to really explore the impossible murder and actually wrap up the mystery. I don't really like the way the Reffner murder is linked to the Merriweather household, as basically the murderer decided to use the most unique item in Chicago (a Tibetan scarf) to kill the victim and accidentally left part of it on the victim, so yeah, while I can accept that the Tibetan scarf is a clue that would only point to a very exclusive club in Chicago in the thirties, it's such a specific clue it feels very artificial. I do like a certain clue regarding the identity of the murderer left on the scene though, which is pointed out by Westborough. The quasi-impossible murder on Adam Merriweather is.... plausible, workable and fairly-clewed, but also not super surprising. It kinda reminded me of Norman Berrow's work: yes, it is a perfectly acceptable solution to a locked room mystery, and there's an actual trick behind and the author went the way to properly leave clues in the narrative and all that.... but it's also a very straightforward trick, and I think one specific clue was too much: it points too obviously towards the solution, and in fact, once a certain word was dropped I was already expecting the murder to be related to that even before the murder happened! I like the idea of how the murderer set-up the whole impossible murder though, and how it explains a lot of other mysteries that occur throughout the story, but there were a few times where I think Clason just... left clues indicating the murderer in rather obvious places because he didn't know how to else resolve the story, leading to things like the scarf and later, a certain disappearing object that is hidden in a rather risky place, and those are little moments where I think that it doesn't make any sense for the murderer to have done that, and it only makes sense from the POV of the author to leave such clues there even though the murderer wouldn't have done that if they have any notion of self-preservation. That said, I think the impossible murder itself, while not featuring a surprising solution, is reasonably memorable due to its unique setting of the Tibetan Room, and it makes good use of what's found in this place to murder Adam Merriweather. 

So The Man from Tibet wasn't exactly what I had expected it to be based on vague, 10-year old memories, but it was still an entertaining mystery novel. The best part of the book remains its original themes, focusing on Tibet, its religions and the art, and the way the Western characters look at those topics and for example the adventurous accounts of people visiting Tibet. As a mystery, The Man from Tibet is on the whole a competently written and plotted one, and while in some aspects, Clason seems to take the easy way out in regards to clewing and the 'main mystery' happens late and is a bit too telegraphed, I think the book on the whole is an entertaining one and worth checking out.

Wednesday, July 5, 2023

Taken at the Flood

“And the LORD said unto Noah, Come thou and all thy house into the ark; for thee have I seen righteous before me in this generation."
"Genesis" (KJV)

Finally moving away from short stories!

Shuuichi is meeting up with his old group friends of his university outdoor activity club for the first time in a few years since they graduated, but because something awkward happened between him and one of his friends, he decides to bring his cousin Shoutarou along too. One of the friends, Yuuya, tells the group about a strange underground complex he discovered when he was in this same area half a year ago and he convinces them to have a look at it together. Yuuya didn't quite remember the exact location though, and it takes them a long time to reach the abandoned spot deep, deep in the mountain forest, where their phones of course have no signal. It is already almost dusk when they arrive at the spot, so they have no choice but to spend the night here, which is also true for family of three they happen to come across: they got lost in the woods hunting for mushrooms. Yuuya shows the group a hidden manhole, with a ladder leading down into a cave. Behind a large rock they find a steel door, which leads inside the rather surprisingly large underground complex, which was apparently built within an existing natural cave, following its natural contours. The underground complex consists of three basement floors, the upper two basement floors consisting of one large corridor with about twenty rooms on each floor, and a third basement floor with fewer, but larger rooms, but groundwater has already flooded the third basement floor. In one of the rooms they find a building plan, and the group learns this secret underground base is called The Ark. Shoutarou and Yuuya share the same suspicions about the place: it was probably an underground hideout built several decades ago by either revolutionaries or some shady cult, though it has been abandoned for a long time, and Yuuya notes nothing has changed since he first came across this place. Fortunately for the group, there's a working generator in the Ark, so they have electricity and lights in here, and are for example able to keep their phones charged, even if they can't communicate with the outside world. As they explore the rooms in the Ark, they not only find a communications room with monitors connected to security cameras aimed at the manhole they came in through and another emergency exit (though that one connects to the flooded third basement floor), they also find a lot of supplies and tools left by whoever used this building in the past, including mattresses and blankets, so Shuuichi, Shoutarou, his friends and the family of three are able to spend the night in the Ark in relative comfort, and it's at least better than having to camp outside.

Of course, that is until in the early morning, they are forcefully awakened by an earthquake. While fortunately, only one of them is lightly hurt by hitting her head, they soon learn they are in a desperate situation: the large rock which had been sitting in front of the steel door leading back to the ladder has been moved by the earthquake, blocking the door! When they go to the second basement floor beneath the entrance and the rock, they find the rock is actually attached to a pulley system, which can be operated by turning a wheel in that room: Shoutarou suspects this was a security measure of the Ark's original users. In times of trouble, they could use the pulley system to first pull the rock towards the door to barricade themselves. Closer examination of the system shows they can actually pull the rock through a hole down to the second basement floor: this was probably designed like that so if the first door was breached, they could pull the rock down one floor below and then block the door to this room, where theres's not only the pulley system, but also the ladder leading down the currently flooded third basement floor. But because the pulley system has to be operated manually, this means the person turning the wheel will be locked up in this room, as the rock will then block this door. But not only is the third basement floor now flooded, the earthquake has caused the water level to slowly rise, and in just about a week, more of the second basement floor will be flooded, which will render the pulley system unusable. This means one of the ten people here shall have to "sacrifice" themselves to save the others: they will have to operate the wheel and pull the rock down to the second basement floor, opening the steel door outside, but locking themselves in the room below. But not only is the water level rising, due to the isolated location of this base, the fact they don't know exactly where they are and there's no phone signal, and it's unclear how long it'll take them to make it back to the civilized world because who knows what the earthquake has caused or whether new earthquakes will occur, it is not certain that the others will be able to get help in time for the person left behind. It is during this stressful time one of them ends up dead: Yuuya is found strangled in one of the rooms while they were all looking for tools that might be useful. Nobody understands why Yuuya was murdered, but they realize that if there's one person who should sacrifice themselves and put themselves in danger in order to save the others, it's the person who just killed someone. But can they figure out who the murderer is in time while imprisoned in this underground base, and can they convince the murderer to repent for the murder and help the others? The deadline is about one week, but the clock is ticking faster and faster in Yuuki Haruo's Hakobune ("The Ark", 2022).

I have never read anything by Yuuki before, but Hakobune caught my attention because it managed to rank into the various major best mystery book rankings for books released in 2022 (technically late 2021 - late 2022), taking first place in Bunshun's Mystery Best 10, second place in the Honkaku Mystery Best 10 and fourth place in Kono Mystery ga Sugoi 2023 among others. The description also sounded interesting, with an underground closed circle situation and the people being forced to find the murderer because they need them to sacrifice themselves to save the others. I also happened to catch people saying here and there the logic behind the solution of the mystery was memorable, and as a big fan of logic-focused mystery stories, I of course had to read this.

So I went in with pretty high expectations, and yeah, I was not disappointed! Though I have to say, this was also because I had heard people saying that you had to be prepared for a very artificial closed circle situation, a very forced way to put the characters in their specific predicement and that's really true. You can easily tell that the whole deal with the underground complex, and especially how the pulley system is set-up with a rock and how the one operating it will have to stay in that room with a rising water level is all just there to put the characters in a very desperate situation, but at no time does it ever feel really natural. Of course, mystery fiction is often incredibly artificial, and not seldom, the curious locations or characters just scream out loud they only exist to faciliate a specific mystery plot, but in the case of Hakobune, I have to say the Ark really feels like one big plot device. You don't really learn much about the Ark itself throughout the book, only that it exists and theories about why it is built the way it is. Also: the dimensions of the Ark are a bit wacky. The whole thing is built inside a natural cave, but still, it's an underground complex with corridors, stairways and rooms (with working electricity), so it can't be that spacious, and yet people can wander around the complex without others really noticing them or hearing them walking around, which is really weird. More murders occur in the book besides the initial one with Yuuya, but while you could argue the Yuuya murder was feasible because nobody expected people to be murdered and they were walking in and out of rooms to find tools, it's extremely odd people could go about relatively silently in this underground base once everyone was aware a murderer was among them. The corridors and rooms really have to really big for that to work, though this complex is supposed to be built by some fringe group. So you do need to accept some things for this book to work.

But when it works, it works! Because they have to choose one of the survivors to operate the machine and pull the rock down, they all believe it's the murderer who should do that (because they have already taken a life; the least they can do is help the others). But as they're cut off from the outside world with limited resources at their disposal, Shoutarou is very fixated on the point of making an air-tight case based on logical reasoning, because there's not really much else they can rely on, being locked up underground. By proving beyond any doubt who the murderer is, they hope to convince the murderer to do the "correct" thing to make amends, while meanwhile, Shoutarou also stresses the fact they are not looking for a scapegoat or trying to pin the crime on the easiest person: they need to know for sure for themselves who the murderer is, or else they'll force an innocent person into locking themselves up in a flooding room and they could potentially cause this person's death if they don't manage to return in time after escaping through the steel door and up the ladder. This does make the first part of the story a bit slow, as there aren't really many usuable clues available yet, and all they can do is wait as the time limit approaches (which does lead to some parts where almost a whole day passes without anything really happening, so it feels a bit hasty at times).

But thing starts to become tenser once you're past the halfway point, with more murders happening and of course the stress slowly building as people start to clash with each other (which is also partially because you also have the family of three who are "outsiders" to the other people), but also long-time feuds starting to flare up. The second murder is especially gruesome, but it is also basically the starting signal for the detectives to really begin their work, as we finally have clues and situations that allow us to make meaningful deductions about the murderer, about how they committed the crime and how their actions will, in a logical manner, eventually lead us to their identity. This culminates in a fantastic denouement scene, just before the deadline as the water keeps on rising. The logical chain used to point out who the murderer is, is quite impressive. While in terms of "events", I'd say there happens less than you'd expect initially and it's not a very long book at any rate either, but there are surprisingly many hints and clues spread throughout the narrative, and some of them are deliciously clever. Objects the murderer used, places they must have visited, all of that is stringed into a surprisingly solid chain of logic, eventually pointing to one and one character alone as the murderer. When it comes to the strenght of the reasoning pointing towards the murderer, I'd say Hakobune is a really strong novel, and definitely a recommended read for those who like Ellery Queen-like mystery novels with long chains of deductions based on the physical evidence and what they say about the actions of the murderer. The way a small hint first leads to a seemingly innocent observation ("Okay, so that clue means the murderer did that. So what?") but then snowballs into something more important until you have a really big indicator of the identity of the murderer is great and I also like how the deduction revolve around certain objects you seem far too seldom in puzzle plot mysteries even though they are so common. The way they are used here is very natural, but cleverly done, and therefore very satisfying. The big climax, after the murderer has been denounced and they are asked to pull the rock down and lock themselves up for the time being so the others can escape and find help is also great, and actually also form a small mystery narrative on their own, as more cleverly hidden clues are used to facilitate this great escape epilogue. The epilogue was certainly the cherry on top of a very cool mystery novel.

But you do have to roll with the initial artificial set-up of Hakobune for it to work. If you can get to that point, you're treated to a very impressive closed circle mystery novel that has a very memorable chain of deduction at the end denouncing the murderer in this unique, almost absurd situation. I can definitely see why it ended up so high on many of the major annual mystery rankings, as it is not only a great mystery novel, but the tense underground closed cricle situation also allows for some cool drama, and it never overstays its welcome. The book definitely has made me curious to Yuuki's other books, so I might explore those in the future.

Original Japanese title(s): 夕木春央『方舟』

Wednesday, June 28, 2023

The Dark Side of the Door

And the more that I knocked 
The hotter I got 
The hotter I got 
The harder I'd knock 
I just gotta break through the door
"Gotta Knock a Little Harder" (The Seatbelts)

I got the e-book of this book for free from BookWalker, but I still think that was a rare pricing error, because it was free for only half a day and I couldn't find any announcements about it being distributed for free...

Two weeks ago, I reviewed Aosaki Yuugo's short story collection Knockin' on Locked Door, which introduced the reader to a detective agency bearing the same title as the book. Run by Gotemba Touri and Katanashi Hisame (and their part-time assistant/housekeeper Kusuriko), the two detectives specialize in completely different types of crimes: Touri specializes in impossible crimes (howdunnit), while Hisame focuses on inexplicable crimes (whydunnit) and whenever a client appears at their offices (something that doesn't happen often enough), both detectives always hope it's their kind of case, because usually, the other one is forced to play assistant to the other. Touri and Hisame know each other from university, where they studied criminology with two other friends withw whom they sometimes cross paths: Ugachi is a police detective who usually doesn't really like working with her old study mates, but she knows they're the best at what they do. Meanwhile, the fourth member of their criminology class has made a career on the opposite side: under the name "Cheap Trick" Mikage has been working as a crime consultant, creating murder plans (with "cheap tricks") for his clients and occassionally, Touri and Hisame find themselves having to work on a case that involves their old friend. In Knockin' On Locked Door 2 (2019), the reader is treated to six new adventures of the titular detective agency.

The first Knockin' On Locked Door was an entertaining series of stories by Aosaki, where he combined his Queen-esque plotting focusing on chains of deductions based on (the state of) physical evidence with plots that usually revolved around the impossible, the inexplicable or a combination of both. While the book, on the whole, was quite good, it was also the mystery equivalent of popcorn or a bag of crisps: each story was very short, following the exactly same four act structure, and usually focused on a single idea and while most of the stories were usually at least "okay" and some really good, it was also the type of collection that just fades away easily because everything felt so light and formulaistic. Knockin' On Locked Door 2 is basically more of the same, so if you didn't like the first one, you'll find nothing to change your mind here: it's still a very light-hearted short story collection where almost all stories follow a formula, and while usually the stories are well plotted and some are really clever, it's really similar to the first book. In fact, I read both books in quick succession, and it took me a while to actually get started on the reviews, but I honestly couldn't remember which book had which stories, because they were all so samey, despite being about very different situations each time. And okay, it probably didn't help I waited like over a year before I got started on the reviews...

The opening story Ana no Aita Misshitsu ("The Locked Room With A Hole") is about a kind of locked room. Or at least, it was at one point in time. A man was found murdered in the shed where he usually spent his days off working on DIY furniture, lying across a table he had been working on with a driver in his head. The door of the shed was locked from the inside, the key found with the man, and no windows a person would fit through.... but there is a gigantic hole in the back wall, cut open with a power saw. So considering there's a hole in the wall it isn't really a locked room, and the fallen paint can and the paint on the floor in front of the door suggests why the murderer did this, but can Touri and Hisame figure out who the murderer is based on the state of this odd locked room? Yes, they can, and it's a technically sound story, with a good focus on physical evidence which allows you to deduce a lot of the crime yourself, though I have to admit the initial impact of the gigantic hole in the wall is much bigger than the surprises you'll find later in the story: it's a fine detective story and there's a good way in which the hole is used to deduce who did it, but the idea of the hole itself is a bit more impressive than the deductive chain leading to the culprit

A woman is found murdered in Tokei ni Matsuwaru Ikutsu no Uso ("A Few Lies About A Watch"), and the main suspect is her boyfriend, with whom she had a row earlier that evening. However, the boyfriend has an alibi, as he was performing on stage with his band, while the time of death of the victim is determined by both forensic investigation and her broken watch, and the boyfriend most definitely has an alibi for the time the victim's watch stopped at. Of course, the police doesn't blindly trust a stopped watch, but the victim's watch was a special case: it is a limited edition radio-controlled watch with the special "feature" nobody can actually change the time of the watch! The makers were so confident in the clock's accuracy, it actually doesn't even feature a crown, and can only be opened by the makers (battery replacements are of course free of charge). As nobody could've tampered with the time of that specific clock, it appears the boyfriend has a solid alibi, but is it really so solid?  The idea of how this "perfect alibi" is created is a bit artificial (who's going to buy such a watch?) but the clues in this story that point out how the murderer managed to create this alibi are really cleverly hidden in the story, and result in a satisfying tale of deduction, as in hindsight, you realize you really should have solved this mystery yourself considering the obvious clues. I also think this is one of the few stories where the characters unique to this story really make an impression, instead of being a bland A, B or C who'll be forgotten by the time the next story starts.

Ugachi Keibuho, Jiken Desu ("Lt. Ugachi, it's a case!") is almost like a spin-off story, as it focuses on Ugachi instead of the duo from the detective agency. Ugachi is investigating the apparent suicide of a writer, who fell off the seventh floor balcony of his room. A witness of an opposite building however states they saw a woman in the apartment above the victim's room looking down her balcony too around the presumed time of death, but she never called the police and the body was only reported much later. The woman living one floor above actually worked with the victim in the past, and she had been sexually harrassed and assaulted by him, so she has a motive, but the problem is that the victim's apartment was locked from the inside, and the key was found inside his room, so how could the woman have made it look like a suicide? It's a story that works best as a spin-off story I think, as while the howdunnit itself isn't really memorable and the physical clues pointing to the truth of what happened are a bit too mundane, I think it works perfectly as a story where Ugachi herself is the main detective, giving the reader a story that isn't strictly about how or why, but manages to turn it in a kind of different mystery.

In Kieru Shoujo Ou Shoujo ("The Vanishing Girl, The Pursuing Girl"), the two detectives are hired to find a girl who disappeared from a tunnel running beneath a road: her friend spotted the girl from the other side of the road, waving to her. The girl then entered the tunnel which should've taken her to the other side of the road, but no matter how long her friend waited, the girl never showed up at the other end of the tunnel, nor was she seen returning back to the entrance of the tunnel (the opposite side of the road). Little time has passed so the police hasn't been informed yet, especially as the friend's not sure whether the girl disappeared by choice or against her will, so Touri and Hisame start investigating the dorm where the girl lives to see if they can find any clues about her disappearance. The investigation is surprisingly more focused on the why of the impossible disappearance than the how, and while in the end, that does work in the story's advantage, it still reads a bit weird. Not a big fan of this story though, as both the why and the how feel a bit underwhelming, and you really wonder whether this was the most logical thing for the culprit to do.

Mottomo Manuke na Dekishitai ("The Stupidest Drowned Body") has Touri and Hisame investigate a very odd death orchestrated by their old friend Mikage AKA Cheap Trick. A IT company president was found drowned in an exclusive club members only pool one early morning. The man had drowned about eight hours earlier and had been lying in the water since, but... there had hardly been any water in the pool when he died! The previous evening, after a reserved party at this pool, someone had drained the pool of the water, which was only discovered at midnight. The caretaker switched the water management tool on again at midnight, and it would take about eight hours to fill the pool again, just in time for the morning swimmers. It seems thus that the victim had somehow managed to drown himself while there was basically just a puddle lying on the pool floor. But of course, Mikage is behind this, so there was some trick to how a drowned body appeared in an empty pool. By far the best story of the whole collection, it's always with these Mikage stories a cheap trick by which this inexplicable murder was created, but still a very memorable one, and the idea of the victim just drowning in his swimming wear in a puddle in a basically empty pool is just really silly in the good sense: just inexplicable enough for an interesting murder mystery, without being overly dramatic.

Door no Kagi wo Akeru toki ("When The Door Is Unlocked") is the final story, and brings the old four university friends together, when Mikage suddenly appears again and challenges his old friends to solve a locked room mystery they all know very well, because it's something that happened to themselves a few years ago, when they were studying criminology together. In a flashback, we are told how the four of them were working together on their graduation project, which involved investigating a real crime, when one of them was assaulted: the victim was found bleeding from his neck and an ambulance had to be called immediately or he wouldn't have lived to tell the tale. However, the house he was found in was locked from the inside, and the key was found inside a cup in the living room where the victim was found. Mikage now wants them to solve what really happened back then. A story that is more interesting as a flashback case fleshing out the relations between Touri, Hisame, Ugachi and Mikage rather than as a locked room mystery itself, as the trick behind the locked room is really old and a lot of readers will probably be familiar with one or more variants on the exact same idea. Aosaki obviously wouldn't be himself if he wouldn't pay good attention to clewing, but still, it's not a really memorable locked room mystery on its own merits, and works better as a story for those who wanted to learn more about the protagonists, especially as previous stories follow a formula so rigid, so this one stands out.

So like the first collection, Knockin' On Locked Door 2 is a lot like popcorn, a light snack that never really disappoints, but in comparison tot the first book, I'd say this one is not as good. The first one simply had more stories I really liked overall. I don't really hate any of the stories in this second volume, but I don't think the highest highs of this volume are as high as those we saw in the first volume and while some readers will like the attempt to flesh out the characters a bit more in the two outlier stories in the second volume, I found it, on the whole, just a tad weaker.

Original Japanese title(s): 青崎有吾『ノッキンオン・ロックドドア2』:「穴の開いた密室」/「時計にまつわるいくつかの嘘」/「穿地警部補、事件です」/「消える少女追う少女」/「最も間抜けな溺死体」/「ドアの鍵を開けるとき」

Wednesday, June 21, 2023

The Bloodstained Book

'I will now lecture,’ said Dr Fell, inexorably, ‘on the general mechanics and development of the situation which is known in detective fiction as the “hermetically sealed chamber.” 
"The Hollow Man"

I don't even remember the last time I did a review of a non-fictional work!

Among fans of classically-styled puzzle plot mysteries, the locked room murder is of course a very popular trope. The idea of an utterly impossible crime, like a murder occuring inside a room from which the murderer simply couldn't have escaped because all exits were locked from the inside or because all the exits were observed, is of course very alluring, and ever since we had the double murder in the Rue Morgue, we have seen countless of variations on this particular variation of the impossible crime. For over a century, the locked room mystery has entranced readers all across the globe, and writers have struggled with coming up with new versions of what often still boils down to a very similar problem: a crime happening at a specific sealed or observed space, with no sign of the culprit. There are of course other variations too, like someone disappearing from an observed spot, or for example the famous 'no-footprints-in-the-snow' example. While there are many variations, many people have tried to create categorizations for the broad types of solutions to these impossible crimes. The most famous one probably being the Locked Room Lecture in John Dickson Carr's The Hollow Man (The Three Coffins), where Dr. Fell, in a meta-moment, starts categorizing the types of solutions to the locked room murder and many, many authors since have come up with their categorizations of solutions.

People also love lists for some reason, so you'll probably find plenty of people listing their favorite, or even, if they are ambitious, the "best" locked room mysteries. I have no interest in lists in general, so you'll never see one here from me, but I have in the past discussed a book that came close: Arisugawa Arisu no Misshitsu Daizukan ("Arisugawa Alice's Great Illustrated Guide to Locked Rooms"), which is also known as An Illustrated Guide to the Locked Room 1891-1998 was a wonderful book written by Arisugawa Alice, where he selected 50 important locked room mysteries from both Japan and abroad. As the title suggests, one important aspect of the book was the visual aspect: each entry featured nicely drawn maps and illustrations of the crime scene in each story, helping the reader visualize the setting of each story. Many of the stories featured don't feature floorplans/diagrams themselves, so it was very cool to these stories properly visualized. While Arisugawa also discussed each story with an entry, introducing the story and setting of each locked room, he did not go into much detail for each story, as he avoided spoilers.

Iiki Yuusan is probably best known as the authority on Ellery Queen in Japan, so I have to admit, I was a bit surprised when I learned his latest book, released earlier this week, is titled Misshitsu Mystery Guide (2023). Misshitsu Mystery Guide offers an extensive overview of the locked room mystery by discussing fifty titles in total: 30 Japanese stories and 20 foreign ones. Like in An Illustrated Guide to the Locked Room 1891-1998, the entries also feature diagrams and floorplans drawn especially for this release, helping the reader visualize each crime scene. However, the introduction does make very clear this is not just "Iiki's version of Arisugawa's book" and that it has a completely different angle from which it approaches the theme of the locked room mystery. For Iiki wants to show the sheer variety within the locked room murder trope and in order to do so, he has decided to spoil the solutions of each entry. The book is divided in two halfs: all fifty stories are briefly introduced in their own entry, with explanations about the story, a more in-depth description/explanation of the locked room situation and a short write-up by Iiki about the merits of the story and why it was picked. 

However, the real brilliance of Misshitsu Mystery Guide comes in the second half, where Iiki can freely spoil the solutions of all 50 stories. Of course, this book would just be... a spoiler if all it did was explain how each locked room mystery was created, but Iiki goes beyond that, naturally. For that is what makes this book unique: because the guide is written with the premise of spoiling the solutions, Iiki managed to select 50 titles based on the solution. And that sounds very similiar to the trick behind a locked room mystery, but that would not be correct. What I mean is that Iiki, because he can freely spoil each story, manages to make a selection not simply based the merits of "the trick" behind a locked room mystery. It's not just about how original or impactful the trick of a locked room mystery is. I guess this is where Iiki being an Ellery Queen authority influences the book the most, because for example, there are some books Iiki picked not because the trick behind the locked room murder was so original (in fact, a lot of them he even calls obvious or simple), but because the line of reasoning to uncovering that trick was so brilliant. There are also stories he picked that aren't technically (impossible) locked room murders, but only become so when you get into spoiler territority, something he was only able to do because he's free to spoil the stories. The result is a book that has some really unique picks for a guide on locked room mysteries, but Iiki's entries do make clear each time why he selected each book.


The first entry for example, The Murders in the Rue Morgue, Iiki explains, is definitely not picked because of the merits of the trick itself, but because how it is a first example of showing the logical reasoning behind solving a locked room. He intentionally picks John Dickson Carr's The Problem of the Green Capsule over The Hollow Man, because he considers it a better work in terms of fair play, and the reasoning behind how the crime is solved. On the Japanese side, you have usual suspects like Honjin Satsujin Jiken (The Honjin Murders), but also a more experimental book like Ashibe Taku's Steam Opera, or Imamura Masahiro's Shijinsou no Satsujin (Death Among the Undead), where Iiki manages to show the versatility of the locked room problem in well-thought out analyses of the books and their place in the greater picture. The fifty books in Misshitsu Mystery Guide are definitely not all you'd immediately expect in a list of locked room mysteries, but Iiki always explains convincingly why he selected them for a book about the potential of the locked room mystery and how the trope is more than just a parlor trick and never "an all-purpose trope you can just use in any mystery story", but how the locked room murder can also always function as a device for other mystery tropes and how even a simple or re-hashed trick can faciliate a great mystery novel by properly focusing on the reasoning/solving element of a mystery.

The book also features three extra editorials. The last one is simply a list of another fifty books that didn't make the final cut (but probably interesting enough to read), but the other two are much more interesting. In the introduction, I already mentioned how John Dickson Carr used the Locked Room Lecture to present a categorization of solutions to the locked room mystery. In the first editorial, Iiki collects many more categorizations from various books and authors from both Japan and abroad (in English language books). It's really handy to see the various categorizations in one article, so not just Carr's, but also from Clayton Rawson, Edogawa Rampo, Abiko Takemaru, Yamaguchi Masaya and many more. I have to admit I was surprised by the news that a year before Carr's Locked Room Lecture, a Japanese author had already published a story with one too by the way! The second editorial similarly collects categorizations of motives/justifications for creating a locked room from various books.

I have read about two-thirds of the Japanese titles, and not even half of the foreign titles, so there are some entries I won't be able to read for a while, but based on the entries I have read, I'd say Misshitsu Mystery Guide is definitely worth a read if you're in any way interested in the locked room mystery trope.While the book does depend a lot on spoiling a lot of books, Iiki's selection does a good job at showing the potential of the locked room mystery, and by not focusing solely on the pure tricks of each entry, but looking at locked rooms from diverse mystery-related angles, like how good the logic is behind solving a locked room mystery, or how a locked room mystery can be used to hide a different mystery trope, Iiki has come up with a book that is also valuable to creators themselves. The diverse examples of how a locked room mystery can be used in a story, and the inclusion of the various categorizations should stimulate the creative minds of people wanting to write a locked room mystery themselves.

Original Japanese title(s): 飯域勇三『密室ミステリガイド』

Wednesday, June 14, 2023

Ever After

 Made from a tree, 
But he's like you and me!
"Pinocchio: The Series"

Now I think about it, I have probably seen much more of Pinocchio: The Series (the Tatsunoko anime) than the Disney adaptation...

Don't forget: Netflix will be releasing the adaptation of the first book Akazukin, Tabi no Tochu Shitai to Deau ("And On Her Way, Little Red Riding Hood Met A Corpse" 2020), and it's directed by the person who also did 33pun Tantei!

After safely delivering her basket and solving a couple of murders along the way, Little Red Riding Hood returned home to her mother. One day, she happens to pick up a wooden arm lying by the road, left by two cats and a fox who were struggling with something inside a bag. To Little Red Riding Hood's big surprise, the arm can actually move on its own, and when she gives it a pencil, the arm starts to communicate: the arm belongs to Pinocchio, a wooden marionette who dreams of becoming a real boy, but some foolish life choices later he was sold off to a circus to do a living wooden puppet act: the fox and cats Little Red Riding Hood saw earlier were actually dragging Pinocchio back to the circus after a failed escape attempt, and his arm was accidentally left behind. Little Red Riding Hood's mother, quite aware of her daughter's rather sharp mind, tells her daughter to help the poor boy and get him out of the circus. And so Little Red Riding Hood's off with an arm in her basket as she travels the world to retrieve Pinocchio's body and help him become a real boy, but the way to the end of their quest is long, and along the way, she of course encounters fantastical murders she has to solve in Aoyagi Aito's 2022 short story collection Akazukin, Pinocchio wo Hirotte Shitai to Deau ("And After Picking Up Pinocchio, Little Red Riding Hood Met a Corpse").

By now, you should now the drill with these Once Upon A Time short story collections by Aoyagi. Akazukin, Pinocchio wo Hirotte Shitai to Deau is the fourth book in the series. The first and third books, titled Mukashi Mukashi Aru Tokoro ni, Shitai ga Arimashita ("Once Upon A Time, There Was A Body", 2019) and Mukashi Mukashi Aru Tokoro ni, Yappari Shitai ga Arimashita ("Once Upon A Time, There Really Was A Body", 2021) respectively, had Aoyagi turn well-known Japanese fairy tales and fables into puzzle plot murder mysteries, where the magical and fantastical of the original stories were used in surprising ways to present wonderful detective stories. The second volume however was about Western (European) fairy tales and fables and also had a slightly different set-up: whereas the "Japanese" volumes featured short stories which were not related to each other besides their themes, the four stories found in Akazukin, Tabi no Tochu Shitai to Deau ("And On Her Way, Little Red Riding Hood Met A Corpse" 2020) all formed one larger narrative together and featured a recurring detective character in the form of Little Red Riding Hood, who was travelling with her basket and who usually had to solve the murders along the way so she could continue with her journey. The fourth volume in this series follows this same set-up, with four stories (+ one intermezzo) that form one narrative about Little Red Riding Hood and (parts of) Pinocchio travelling together as they try to retrieve the marionette's body and make him a real boy.

Mokugekisha wa Deku no Bou ("The Eyewitness is a Wooden Boy") starts with Little Red Riding Hood finding Pinocchio's arm and learning about his predicement, so she quickly stuffs his arm in her basket and makes her way to the nearby town, where the circus is. She eventually watches the show and sees how Pinocchio (without one of his arms) is forced to do an act, but when she demands his release, Little Red Riding Hood is thrown out of the circus tent. She returns home with Pinocchio's arm to contemplate their next move, but the following day, Little Red Riding Hood is visited by the police, as the fox Antonio has been murdered in one of the circus tents last night, and there was an eyewitness who states Little Red Riding Hood was the killer. And this witness happens to be... the head of Pinoccio, a boy who can't lie or else his nose grows. And thus the weird situation arises where Pinocchio positively states Little Red Riding Hood is the killer of Antonio, even though she's here to save him. I have to admit I have never read Pinocchio or seen any adaptation completely, so I only know bits and pieces, a scene here and there. But while the idea of Pinocchio, a boy who can't lie, stating Little Red Riding Hood (our protagonist) is the killer, is a pretty funny to use pre-existing elements. In this story, we learn that Pinocchio had been taken apart as a punishment for messing up his act earlier in the day, and a series of accidents led to his head being in the tent just as Antonio was being killed, but so much of this mystery plot, about how Pinocchio could've "witnessed" Little Red Riding Hood commit the murder, hinges on elements that, as far as I know, don't come directly from the original Pinocchio story, so you can easily guess that these original elements will feature in the mystery one way or another. Which makes it a rather simple story, and where you also feel the story strays too far from the original Pinocchio story, taking away a lot of the charm. So I thought the opening story rather weak.

Onnatachi no Dokuringo on the other hand stays much closer to the source fairy tale and is also much more fun. It is a kind of inverted story, where we first learn about Hildehilde, a beautiful girl born in a village of witches, but who had no talent for witchcraft herself. She eventually ran away from her home village, with her mother's magic mirror, which allowed her to see anything she desired. Hildehilde eventually married the king of the Apfel Kingdom, who already had a daughter Snow White from a previous marriage. While things were good between Hildehilde and Snow White eventually, things soured after the king's death, and now Hildehilde sees no other way but to kill Snow White. However, the hunter she hired to kill Snow White betrayed her, and now Snow White is living with the seven dwarves in the forest, a fact she learned through her magic mirror. She now still plots Snow White's death. Little Red Riding Hood, having retrieved Pinocchio's head in the previous story, is still after the rest of his body as it was stolen at the end of the story, runs into one of the seven dwarves, and is invited for a meal at their home. Hildehilde witnesses all of this through her mirror, and eventually comes up with a plan to poison Snow White with a poisoned apple, but how will her plans go? This is a funny inverted-type of mystery, where we follow both Hildehilde and Little Red Riding Hood. In the Hildehilde side of the story, we see how the queen uses information she sees via her mirror as clues to come up with her poisoning plot, while in the Little Red Riding Hood parts, we follow a plot where first one of the dwarves is killed and Little Red Riding Hood slowly realizing what is going on. Telling more would be spoiling the best parts of the story, but this is a huge improvement over the first story, for while things like Hildehilde's backstory and everything may be original inventions, the core mystery plot makes good use of familiar elements like the magic mirror and the poisoned apple to present a fun 'battle of the wits'.

Little Red Riding Hood's quest then brings her to Hamelin in Hamelin no Saishuu Shinpan ("The Last Judgment of Hamelin"), where 45 years ago, the Pied Piper took away the town's children after the town refused to pay his reward for saving them from a plague of rats. The Pied Piper however was caught, and kept imprisoned in the town prison all this time because the laws don't allow for a death penalty. The Pied Piper has since then always played the mandelin every evening from his prison cell (they don't dare give him a pipe instrument). The people in Hamelin also always play music day and night, a kind of superstition as they are afraid of the same tragedy happening again so the idea is they'll drown out the Pied Piper's luring music. There is still a kind of curse hanging over the town though, as there are still next to no children born natively to the town. Little Red Riding Hood arrives just in time for the Hamelin Music Festival and becomes friends with some of the town council members, when on the first evening, everyone is warned: the Pied Piper has somehow escaped his prison, and killed a guard on his way out. Little Red Riding Hood has to figure out how the Pied Piper managed to escape his prison and how to catch him next. While this story is set decades after the original story, it still builds really well on the lore of the Pied Piper of Hamelin, with a town that is still visibly affected by the fact all the children were spirited away by an eerie tune almost fifty years ago. The mechanical explanation of how the Pied Piper managed to escape his prison isn't really impressive, but the explanation of why now, why he escaped after 45 years of imprisonment is good and is a good continuation of the original story.

The final story, Nakayoshi Kobuta no Mittsu no Misshitsu ("The Three Locked Rooms of the Three Little Pigs"), brings to Oinkburg, a town founded by the three little pigs. The town is divided in three sections with buildings made of straw, wood and bricks, as originally the three little pigs each built their own houses using those materials. And the whole town is full of factories, where.... other pigs work. Or technically, these are humans turned into pigs. The three little pigs have teamed up with a witch, turning humans into pigs and having them work as slaves in their straw/wood/brick factories to pay back their debts. You're supposed to be changed back into a human once you have paid back your debt, but of course, nobody has ever managed to do that. To the outside world however, the three little pigs pretend to be good businessmen who have started their own town with a good running economy, so they try to play nice to the tourists visiting the town, like Little Red Riding Hood. At least, that is only at the beginning, for Little Red Riding Hood soon notices there's a rift between the three little pigs, three brothers in fact, about how to run the town, and when one of the brothers is found dead in a straw house, she immediately suspects it's a locked room murder even though to the others, it seems just like an unfortunate accident of the victim falling on a knife. This isn't the only murder to occur in the town however, for soon a locked room murder follows inside a wooden building, and another in a brick building... This is a story that shares a lot of the points I didn't like about the opening story, in that while the idea of three locked rooms in buildings of different materials is fun, a lot of how these mysteries are resolved hinge on elements completely original to this specific story, which means they stand out and make it really easy to solve them. Both the straw and wooden locked rooms are solved within seconds, and even the brick one, which involves a brick wall being made in front of the (inward-opening) door) is solved rather too quickly, and that one is also clewed rather sloppily. There's more to this story in regards to mystery, as this story also involves the climax of the whole Pinocchio storyline, and Little Red Riding Hood herself is put in mortal peril as she's forced to confront the person who stole Pinocchio's story. This is similar to the finale to the previous collection, which also has Little Red Riding Hood having to use her wits to escape a dangerous situation, and while it's fine as a finale to the collection, it still feels a bit underwhelming in terms of surprise and cleverness. 

So all in all, I thought Akazukin, Pinocchio wo Hirotte Shitai to Deau was actually the least entertaining collection of the four released until now. While I love Little Red Riding Hood as a protagonist, and I think the middle two stories are really good at staying close to the source material while also spinning a good mystery story out of it, the opening and finale stories just feel just a tad too distant from the source fairy tales/fables, adding too many original elements that stand out, making it far too easy to guess what the story will do with those elements. Whereas the Snow White and Pied Piper of Hamelin stories stick closer to the source material and build on elements already seen in the original stories, which mean these elements don't stand out nearly as much, making them more surprising when you do see how they were used to facilitate the mystery. I'll still read this series as long as Aoyagi keeps on writing them, as on the whole, it's an entertaining series, but this one was clearly not as strong as previous entries.

Original Japanese title(s): 青柳碧人『赤ずきん、ピノキオ拾って死体と出会う』:「目撃者は木偶の坊」/「女たちの毒リンゴ」/「ハーメルンの最終審判」/「なかよし子豚の三つに密室」

Wednesday, June 7, 2023

The Door-to-Door Deception

Gave it all that I got
And started to knock
Shouted for someone to open the lock
I just gotta get through the door
"Gotta Knock a Little Harder" (The Seatbelts)

It's not as bad as how it went with Kubinashiyakata no Satsujin, but still, I wrote this review 12 months + a week after reading the book. And then the review still had to wait a few months for publication! In the time between me writing this post and it getting published, they actually announced a live-action drama is in production, which will start airing in July and it's directed by none other than Tsutsumi, the director of the original Kindaichi Shounen no Jikenbo drama series, Keizoku and of course Trick!

Knockin' On Locked Door is the title of a 2016 short story collection by Aosaki Yuugo, the name of the title story in said collection and the name of the detective agency run by Gotemba Touri and Katanashi Hisame, though their part-time assistant/housekeeper Kusuriko will probably argue she's actually one trying to get the agency to be succesful. While both Touri and Hisame can be a bit eccentric in their own ways, the unique part of their agency is that the two detectives are very specialized and that they are in a way equal co-workers, but also minor rivals. For Touri specializes in impossible crimes (howdunnit), while Hisame focuses on inexplicable crimes (whydunnit). Each time a new client arrives at the agency, both detectives of course hope they'll be the one to handle the crime, as the other is usually just forced to play assistant for the other and thus have the most boring day ever, though on lucky days, they come across cases that require the abilities of both these detectives. Occasionally, they meet with old acquaintances: Ugachi is an old college classmate who is now a police detective, though she's usually not a big fan of seeing her old friends again nosing around at her crime scenes. Another old college classmate is also in the business of crime, although that is literal: unlike the previous crime-fighting trio, Mikage has chosen the path of the criminal consultant, planning crimes for others to commit, and occasionally, their paths cross, finding themselves on opposite sides.

Knockin' On Locked Door is in a way a book with a very rigid formula, as the stories basically always utilize either a howdunnit or whydunnit focus, or a combination of both. The idea of multiple detectives with different methods can be fun, like seen in Morikawa's Hitotsu Yane no Shita no Tanteitachi ("Detectives Beneath One Roof" AKA Two Detectives and One Watson), where the two detectives were bascially the Ant and the Grasshopper. Or a book I only recently reviewed: Sailor-Fuku to Mokushiroku features the trio of Kyouko, Mizuki and Marii who all focus on different aspects of a crime: Kyouko focuses on the whodunit, Mizuki on the howdunnit and Marii on the whydunnit.This approach however is very different from Knockin' On Locked Door: in Sailor-Fuku to Mokushiroku, the three detectives focus on the same mystery, but from different angles. Knockin' On Locked Door however isn't about the angle from which a crime is examined, but it's the intrinsic type of the mystery that determines whether Touri or Hisame will take the initiative in the investigation. This sounds better than the actual execution however. For obviously, each story will still feature both characters and most stories try to have something to do even for the detective who is forced to play assistant, but it's seldom you really feel it was really necessary to split up the questions of howdunnit and whydunnit across characters, and the synergy between the two elements isn't always as strong.

In fact, it's the opening story Knockin' On Locked Door that does this the best, and while this sounds very negative (don't worry, the book is overall really good), I did think it a shame the book almost peaked right at the start. The two detectives are asked to investigate the death of an artist, who was found murdered inside his locked atelier. Which doesn't make sense, because why wasn't the death dressed as a suicide if it was in a locked room anyway, and why were the paintings thrown across the floor and only one of them painted red? Thus we have a mystery that is both a locked room (the impossible) with very weird features (the inexplicable). The synergy between these two elements is at its best in this story. While the exact why is rather hard to guess, but the way how the why actually explains how the locked room was executed is brilliant, and the trick behind the how is quite clever, yet simple too. Together with the next story, the best story in the collection.

The second story, Kami no Mijikaku Natta Shitai ("The Dead Body Whose Hair Was Cut Short") I already read back in 2017 because it was featured in an anthology. The leader of a small theatrical troupe was found murdered in the small, soundproof apartment the group had been renting for their rehearsals. The body was discovered in the bathroom, wearing only her underwear and for some reason, her long hair had been cut short and been removed from the crime scene. Evidence seems to be pointing towards someone among her three fellow members, but why would anyone want to cut the victim's hair off? A case that is about the inexplicable, and the problem of the cut hair reminds of a certain mystery novel by a well-known Japanese author, the story itself is glad to tell you. I liked the story back in 2017 and now I still do, being very much a story done in the Queen-style as you'd expect of Aosaki. So a focus on physical clues and the state in which they are found, which tells us about what the culprit did or did not do. Some parts of the mystery might require a bit more imagination/guesswork than you'd usually see in a story in that format, but overall, the explanation of why exactly the culprit took the victim's hair with them and why she was left in her underwear in the bathroom is really good, and the story is despite it short length constructed really well.  

Dial W Wo Mawase! ("Dial W!") has a title that is a play on the Japanese title of Dial M for Murder and starts off with two different clients appearing at the agency, so Touri and Hisame have to split up and work on different cases: Touri is looking into the death of an old man who seemingly tripped and died on the street during a midnight stroll, while Hisame has to examine an old safe, which for some reason doesn't open despite its now deceased owner actually left clear instructions as to how to open the safe. The story is again short, so it doesn't really surprise when we later learn the two cases are connected, and I do think the connection is really clever: the death of the old man and the safe intersect in a very interesting manner, and logically explains why both events have occured. The reason why I don't think this story is as strong as the previous two is mainly because the initial split in "two" cases seems rather too obvious, as you just know right away the two things will connect in one way or another, and because the first half of the story focuses at two different investigations, things move rather fast and feel a bit underdeveloped, even in comparison to the other (all very short) stories.

Cheap Trick has Touri and Hisame investigate the murder of a company executive, who had been afraid for his life for a while. He was shot with a rifle in his study through the window, but because the man had been expecting an attempt at his life, he had thick, black-out curtains hanging in front of the windows, making it impossible for anyone outside to snipe them. Yet the man was shot in his study in his chest and found lying near the window, even though he was avoiding the window all this time. So how did the sniper standing beneath the window know the victim would be near the window to be able to shoot him, despite the curtains? It turns out this murder was planned by Mikage, Touri, Hisame and Ugachi's old classmate who know engineers murders for others as a consultant, making this case a personal thing too. Like the title suggest, this one is a pretty cheap trick, in the sense it's fairly simple to guess. Aosaki tries to make it a bit more difficult by adding one element, but even that's a bit too obvious. Not the strongest story in the collection.

Iwayuru Hitotsu no Yuki Misshitsu ("A Locked Room in the Snow In a Way") has Touri investigate the death of a man who was found with a kitchen knife in his chest lying in the middle of the snowy field that lied between his own workshop and that of his brother, with whom he had a big row. The only footsteps in the field are those of the victim (and the persons who found him in the morning) and there are no fingerprints on the snow. A classic no-footprints-in-the-snow set-up, and as you may expect, a lot of the story revolves around Touri proposing many familiar solutions (using the knife as a projectile etc.) to this old trope which get rejected until they arrive at the real solution. Which isn't super exciting on its own, but I have to say the misdirection going on in this story is fairly good, making a solution which without the context would be very disappointing, still a story that is saved by competent plotting.

Juuendama ga Sukunasugiru ("Too Few 10 Yen Coins") is perhaps better translated as The Ten Yen Coin, because it's a play on the Kemelman story The Nine Mile Walk. This story is the odd duck out, not following the usual story format. Agency assistant/housekeeper Kusuriko tells her employers about a strange phone call she happened to overhear, of a man on his smart phone. The line she remembers is "I have too few 10 yen coincs. I need five more." The line stuck with her because the 10 yen coin is worth so little (100 yen is basically the equivalent to 1 euro/1 dollar), so in what situation would you need specifically 10 yen coins, and in such an amount the caller would say they had too few of them and needed five more? Like The Nine Mile Walk, this initiates a discussion that allows the two detectives to come up with various explanations for this specific line and the intended use of these 10 yen coins, taking in account the precise context of the phone call Kusuriko overheard. It takes a long time for the detectives to arrive at the explanation which seems rather obvious to me, though I guess people who are much younger than I might find it more surprising? It's a story that may have been more surprising many years later from now, but I find it hard to believe that it's that hard to guess what this is about.

Kagirinaku Kakujitsu na Dokusatsu ("A Poisoning with Extreme Certainty") is about the death of a politician, who collapsed after drinking his glass of champagne during a speech. Poison was detected in the remainder of the champagne, but a check of the security footage shows nobody forced that specific glass of champagne on the victim, nor did anyone have any chance to put any poison in the glass after it had been picked. The murder is once again the work of Mikage, making this another personal case. Perhaps the least memorable story of the collection, and unfortunately, also the last story. The how of the poisoning can be guessed very quickly once you get through the initial investigative scenes, and from there it's basically a problem-free race to the finish. There are interesting ideas to the crime as regards to some of how it was all timed by the planner of the crime, but still, once you realize how it was done the rest of the mystery falls like a set of dominos.

But looking at the whole collection, I'd say Aosaki did a good job with Knockin' On Locked Door on the whole. If you're looking for depth however, this might not be your book: each story is really short (though usually structured well), with the characters basically just doing their usual two catch phrases/the same comedic act or something like that at the start of a story before moving on to the main mystery, but most of the mysteries are plotted well, and while I do think the book peaked with its opening stories, it's an excellent read if you're looking for something easy to read and yet crave puzzle plots. 

Original Japanese title(s): 青崎有吾『ノッキンオン・ロックドドア』: 「ノッキンオン・ロックドドア」 / 「髪の短くなった死体」 / 「ダイヤルWを廻せ!」 / 「チープ・トリック」 / 「いわゆる一つの雪密室」 / 「十円玉が少なすぎる」 / 「限りなく確実な毒殺」